EternalBliss4U
WQ 4 SD 5 CD 5 US 4 WB 5 OVERALL 4.6 Omg... this is probably one of naruto and boruto fanfic that has perfect character development and design. I am very interested in how good the story development. all these things are not perfect. There is too much information dump that I can't bother to read it. Don't drop it and keep writing ;)
The story is good. However it is filled with info dumb for the first 11 chapter. The problem here is that the info dumb is too drastic and feel bloat on 1 chapter. If can, try to seperate the info dumb between chapter so it will not bored reader or make them drown from that info.Thus the character design is on 3 star. The plot look good but feel utopia type of story. Too innocent for my taste actually. Maybe i am fkin old to read naruto because my innocent thought are all gone hahahaha. Well, one thing author do great is to capture Naruto character. People think Naruto character is just to act naive and friendly. But its deeper than that and author have good grasp on it.
The story is great if you want to see what should happen in Boruto Anime. The characters are well written and the grammar is good too though some of you might not like it because of the harem and r18 scenes. The author has thought about the future of his world and writing beautifully about it. Thanks for uploading this here and I hope I wouldn't see unnecessary drama in future like his wives leaving him or his daughters or sons becoming traitors.
An outstanding plethora of dedication on writing (just based on the word count on a chap), impeccable grammar and a more thorough writing of the bad work done on such amazing show. I honestly thought that boruto story's line could not get more shallow; the old generation was more or less abandoned (majority of them) and turned into a comic relief characters. But here you are, you turned it into an interesting plot, a very job well done to you Author-san. 'Tis what we need, a well written masterpiece. 🔥