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Epyonnn

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Epyonnn
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ujjwalanushka34
ujjwalanushka34Lv1ujjwalanushka34

The intro is very well thought of and so is the protagonist. The story has quite a smooth flow, so well done that. Just a suggestion, it might be a good idea to put a TW before talking about suicide as it is quite a sensitive topic.

Harietta_Brews118
Harietta_Brews118Lv4Harietta_Brews118

I find it interesting that the guy wasn't the usual oddball. he was reasonable and wasn't one to just act out. The story is really interesting starting in a new world. I like it!

IAmACow
IAmACowLv3IAmACow

It's actually pretty good :D

YoanRoturier
YoanRoturierLv2YoanRoturier

Well thought out characters. Smooth writing. And a pretty big world to play with. Keep up the Job author. You deserve more than "hhhhhh." ;)

BlindBandit
BlindBanditLv10BlindBandit

Loving it, basically finding it enjoyable the more I read it. I am finding the MC is well thought out and overall character and world development isn't rushed.

meixiaolian
meixiaolianLv2meixiaolian

The author's narration is great, didn't see any errors from it. Title, synopsis is intriguing and the synopsis also the story is great, give this a read! Hooked by its descriptive narration!

_hestia_
_hestia_Lv2_hestia_

I am not really one for game themed books as such but I do love games and this is a really fun book to read. Lots of action and very well built up

Juliet_Omuadona
Juliet_OmuadonaLv4Juliet_Omuadona

The story is an action pack, every chapter is as intriguing as the last. Characters are very relatable. If you are up for a little adventure then this story is for you.

kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraLv3kuhaku_sora

Correct me if i'm wrong, but this novel is a slow-pace burner or whatever they call it, right, author? I really love how you introuced us the story. There is this classic feeling of the genre isekai innit that you cannot just place your eyes away. Kudos for the author~ [img=recommend]

ghjgyugf
ghjgyugfLv1ghjgyugf

Beautiful!!! The story is so well written there weren't any possible punctuation or spell mistakes grammatical errors were low to none. The characters had the different and interesting mindset, the thoughts of the characters were deep The novel is a worth read Good work author

Proteety_Promi
Proteety_PromiLv3Proteety_Promi

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A great story! And the beginning? It's impressive. I really am in love with your writing style. Keep up, author! Good work!

Aceeye74
Aceeye74Lv2Aceeye74

I've spent a lot of time scrounging through through the internet for good web novels and light novels, but nothing got me hooked faster than this story. I only recently joined this site, so I was excited when I found this gem right off the bat. The prose great, it updates daily, the story is interesting, and the characters are entertaining. There's not much information about the world's lore, but that's probably because there's only 11 chapters as of writing this review. Overall, it's great so far and I recommend it![img=recommend]

mikepeterjack
mikepeterjackLv4mikepeterjack

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RobloxPlayer101
RobloxPlayer101Lv3RobloxPlayer101

Kids loses his only friend so he commits suicid...........mtherfker is this a serious plot. i cant. somekid wants 2 die cuz he lost his only fking friend

Aceeye74
Aceeye74Lv2Aceeye74

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Siuteo
SiuteoLv4Siuteo

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