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The relation between the king and queen was heartfelt, the story itself is flawless the story has many good aspects but few things will bother readers such as grammatical mistakes, punctuation errors may break the dialogues, few spelling mistakes too but if these things could be corrected the novel is gem itself
I loved the tone of the story, the magical world seemed promising the story was well-paced, the dialogues were well scripted the story had a flow in it easily understandable. And couldn't find any particular mistakes that may affect the story, at first I thought the MC would be like a shy innocent kind of girl but turns out no she isn't, tbh this may look like a fake praise but no, this is my honest review author you're doing awesome
The story is amazing, and fresh the characters suit well with the story, the writing is good too, but there were errors like punctuation errors that were breaking the flow of sentences and some grammatical mistakes and minor typography mistakes if the author works on these he'll kill it.. Best of luck author you're doing great
I loved the fantasy-magical theme of the novel the imagination of the writter is wide and Amazing the flow of story was good but there were few Petty mistakes breaking the flaw of the novel like - punctuation mistakes, typography, grammatical errors but if the author works on these things nothing can stop this novel from rocking on. a little cheer up dance for my author best of luck