Reviews of 19706856506134505

a shameless review of course I would give myself well readers one thing I want to say is this is not my story real author is keyblademaster and I don't really care if anyone think that I am stealing this story or this is not right bla bla bla I am just going to delete any uncivilized review!! you can sue me all you want but I don't care this story was just tasting dust in FF.net so I upload it here if real author have any problem I will happily oblige and delete all my chapters but there some people who have habit of giving 1 star review and telling readers I stole the story . I don't want to talk around too much just so you know 1 star reviews I will be deleting them. have fun reading. and don't go poking your nose around another people's business

small harem?? how could it be called a small harem when the mc likes to give the girls he like to others?? the mc fucks tonks and yet he wants to give her to remus because that was on the canon, and pls an NTR tag small harem?? how could it be called a small harem when the mc likes to give the girls he like to others?? the mc fucks tonks and yet he wants to give her to remus because that was on the canon, and pls an NTR tag

I honestly wish I could give a worse review but the grammar is not that bad. The story feels extremely rushed with people acting out of character and the MC's emotions are very exaggerated to the point I almost dropped it during his conversation with death in chapter 1.

So far the story is good although a little depressing that all of Harry’s relationships didn’t work out so far. I hope he finds the right one or ones soon. The writing is good and i like Harry personality a lot. I hope you can keep updating this.

Who will harry actually add to the harem? Since it all sees to be one time tings or just s*x friends for a while before he gives the girls to someone els. Grammar is descent. Character is kinna boring Like the plot, sine its HP story and he do some good

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La historia es buena, me gusta que la hayas sacado, después de todo considero que las páginas de fanfic tienen un diseño que no permite encontrar aveces buenas historias este tantas o muy agradable a la vista, aunque supongo que no planeas terminarla como una versión tuya de esta historia?, igual fue bueno para un rato de lectura

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Sólo le pido al autor que sube esto que lo termine o que agregue 20 capítulos cada mes 😉 me gustó bastante esta novela lástima que tiene pocos capítulos pero aún así es un tesoro a su manera 😔

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