Reviews of Necromancer System (Book 1) Unedited
Necromancer System (Book 1) Unedited
MrDojo
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IN A NUT: ******* fighter MC re;inced as an adopted freeloading 'trashy' young master with a necromancer SYSTEM!! REVIEW: although the system seems has an OP potential, the level up is rather slow! Although the story seems to share a similar fate.. it is undeniably INTERESTING! AUTHOR- SAN, IF there is a ROMANCE pls make it late until the MC is strong enough! THANKS FOR THE CHAPTERS AND KEEP'EM COMING!!
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This isn't for faint of heart or goody two shoes, the MC is a heinous evil person. MC is remorseless, heartless, merciless, cruel, cunning, manipulating, rapist, sodomite, torturer, necromaniac and other evil things. He's a kin-slayer who plotted to kill all of his family and allowed the death his own biological mother too who he hates despite her being innocent and cared very much for his well being. I cannot bring myself to even relate to the MC but scum like them exist so it's a good read to see a rise of an evil villain.
I love this novel and everything about it. For any fans of evil protagonists, calculating protagonists, blood and gore, and dark magic, this is the novel for you. This novel always keeps me wanting more and I believe the story progresses at a good pace, with several chapters being quite long so you feel like you’ve received a good fill of the story for the day. I love the characters involved and the plot that is included throughout each arc, and it always surpasses my expectations. It also has some funny moments that caught me by surprise and I enjoyed a good laugh, which helps you appreciate the story and the fun the author had in writing it. It’s by far one of the best novels I’ve ever read and the author really deserves to be applauded for his writing and dedication to the fan base.
I always like a dark and cruel MC and to be honest you probably cant get any more twisted especially after reading MC backstory so i would like to say great job author because its a great story and a side note for readers if you read this dont complain how its too brutal because the world isnt all rainbows
I wish I could like this novel. Really! I like necromancers and I like systems... And I also like "true neutral" MCs, which some people may describe as "evil"... But I can't enjoy this novel. - The author keeps repeating his informations sooooo much... He is basically 'showing' the scene, and then he 'tells'/explains it to us again.... Sometimes this would be fine, but it happens waaaaaaaay too much. - Sometimes he is not only showing & telling us the scenes, but also let his characters react to the scene, without missing the opportunity to repeat it again. Sometimes less is more! - He is writing about the genital of a 13 year old boy in a 'mildly' sexual way. (I wonder for how many people this is a plus :/) - MC is ALWAYS "widely grinning" like a idiot.... Not in a social situation, but for random mildly positive things.... He is "widely grinning" at least 3 times per chapter... I didn't really care in the beginning, but it seems to be the only mimic/facial expression he is capable of without acting. - I don't like when the MC acts like a retard. Like his walking style, etc.. You could say he has a reason, but to be honest it is a retarded reason. - World background is at least in the beginning very weird and contradictory... A continent, which enjoyed thousands of years of peace, random villages get wiped out in rituals and nobody is really surprised. My opinion. I probably would have cared less, if I didn't hope for something good (necromancers <3). *Grins widely with a scary light in his eyes, which would everybody shiver who recognizes it, but nobody even notices.*
If you want a system novel with some real plot and characters then this is the one for you! This novel is a lot different than most of the *******ish novel I have read on this site because it has actual content where the author vividly describes the world and situation of the mc James and his system is amazing OP but not so OP where he literally becomes the Household lord in two chapters, so I recommend this novel for you fellow system and necromancy lovers( who doesn’t love seeing massive amounts of undead bow to the mc?)
This novel is not for the faint hearted people, Its not your heroic and fair Mc but the opposite is bloody, gory, twisted, dark. A new look at how our mc builds his strengt and the journey he takes. The story is very good written and the story is very stable format and the mc is not op at the start but use more his head which most other novels involving a system that mc relying on all the way. But not in this one so far. The mc he plans each step he takes. I would recommend u take a look and read a couple of chapters and see if u like this type of novel 5stars from me.
Overall good story about a necromancer, I'm always looking for a good necromancer novel, so I'm always happy to find a good one, and I found one here. Writing quality is pretty darn good, for a new writer. World building is coming along nicely. Characters are still growing so they don't seem to be 2d cut outs. A few written mistakes here and there, but nothing that will draw you out of the story and back to reality. The system is coming along nicely, the author has a lot of good ideas. The pace isn't too slow, and it is also not to fast. Guess author found that sweet spot.