MC using space magic on Draco next ch

I'll play devil's advocate here, how do you know that he is using it? The author admitted somewhere that he is using it or do you just think he uses it? not only this platform but also others. I'm seeing comments like this more and more "Must be done using AI", seems thats the new way to low-blow without looking crass

Didnt read yet so I could be entirely wrong but just IF he decided the wanted translate thsi work so he decided start a backlog b4, so he could start with bang to attract attention e have some leeway with rainy days or stone challenges

Wow, I'm impressed. Paradox, I remember commenting 2y ish ago when you announced hiatus that I doubted that this FF would come back from hiatus. Lo and behold, you brought it back; that was a pleasant surprise!

first guy to appear in my mind

Every time MC have a excuse to avoid the girls, he truly becoming a standard beta LN JP protagonist... smh

i quite light this fight development, I mean, sure the author could have built it better, worded it better, but nonetheless still a good thing to do(in moderation!!), the romance i see in FF or novel now days are too perfect, couple gets together and happy until end no clash or wherever but it don't work this way, couples fights for myriads of reasons, mistakes of one side, misunderstanding, words said due outside stress, it happens, it makes the romance more believable.

about David i would say depends, for him " man up" fast cuz it's was a short anime so didn't had time to waste on " growing up arc" so it u plan let canon happen as it is u will need faster up David growing to match it.

by standards Takuma will refuse showing us how beautiful big hearted friendship in a killers dog eat dog world with maybe a fight with his live on stake cuz his choice, hope author don't follow the standard

Sup m8, still plan rewrite or its dropped

ik conflict is necessary for story progression but... MC is dumb as a brick, he insists on entering an academy that his enemies (who at this point are stronger than him in all aspects atm ) are in instead of going to the next similar big city which will have an academy at an equal level ( is political and economical dumbness don't having one and sending their talents and clan hairs it to a "rival" city ) and develop his power then come back to revange.

I would say that i was a tad bit disappointed with MC obsession with getting a human body since his energy "body" is much more flexible and convenient but that's no the reason for my low review,but those are;(read until ch117) 1°>MC is a pushover. he had no need to help the aboriginals tribe at beginning, he got himself hurt,wasted time and energy resources that could be used to make himself better anyone can argue he did it to long run energy but the returns aren't that much differently if focused single minded on himself i would say that helping them was more inefficient. it would be cruel if he ditched them? certainly but this inst a fairy tale where everyone have a happy end. then there new city after time skip, and once again he begins be a pushover. há had no necessity of a sect but still enter one to wich end being frammed because he was too hesitant to defend himself. author tried run way from the troop of sect kill order cuz broke rules and being chased down cuz touched young master Wich quite strange seeing on a xianxia style novel. and once AGAIN he enter ANOTHER sect that he don't need to and guess what? yes you are correct he becomes a pushover again, what a surprise right .... 2° MC is an idiot that don't know utilize his system. while I don't condemn his early choices cuz he was in an environment that he needed those miscellaneous abilities,after getting in the new city Wich was a safe place instead of focusing on his trinity of talent/qi/body he continues wasting energy on miscellaneous just to be a pushover at end, no matter how complex or fancy technique he waste of he inst strong enought to use or withstand attacks cuz difference in realms it's useless. 3° and the last point the Cherry of the cake: the system. actually I have nothing against the functionality of system itself BUT my bone against it is that system is a forced moral compass of MC and if MC don't be a goody two shoes, the system punish MC as it like, i mean WTF, a system is a tool nothing more nothing less, a mean to an end and as a tool it shouldn't never impose at it's user much less dictates what is wrong or not and punish MC if not it would mean that MC that is the tool and system the user but hey thankfully system on this novel is magnanimously rnought to let MC kill when he needs defend himself .... that end here my reviews, i wasn't expecting a epic read from a xianxia system novel but i was expecting something decently read at last but seems i still was too optimistic

there's another novel with basically same plot with newer release date Ch than this one,don't remember the name cuz unfollow it

bruh, he could barely managed to do the most basic of E rank jutsu and he wants get his hand on C one to do what? look at it and get depressed cuz he can't use it? they aren't training talents at corps if this training and tournament last more than 1 year it will be a wonder( doubtful if Takuma will have enought chakra and proficiency to use C rank in an year)

in resume: as everyone expected the hokage and the school board deemed Takuma worthless to send tag him with a limited asset that is a jonin BUT they invested all resources on his education and they need and want get it back in a way, thus Genin Corps the lowest of low of village ninja ranks a.k.a the cannon fodders disposable assets to send in a suicide mission, but don't despair village inst that 'heartless' if Takuma manages to survive and prove his worth he can goes up on Genin Corps and maybe Chunk corps and be a slightly less expendable asset :)

i can be wrong but, the academy itself won't reprove you no matter how bad u do at it, it's only job it's analyze and how u are to academy parameters, who says who pass and fail is homage and the board, that how guy managed to pass,altho total fail on ninjutsu he showed an enormous talent on Taijutsu that convinced the board/homage to pass him(same thing happened to rock Lee + lee had guy as backer too) on Obito case it's cuz he is a Uchiha, regardless of his grades he had chance to awaken sharingan and tension between village and Uchiha was already getting high and pushover as Hiruzen was, maybe don't tried bring up more tension failing a Uchiha

worry not young Takuma, what dont kill you makes you stronger ! probably

prob they rip Ch here using a bot,so those admin prob inst even aware of those fake Ch, even if they are not worth the trouble going on the page manually to delete the fake ch

the tests were separated by like weeks at min and a month at max right? by previous 2 test grades (or was just first one) Takuma results in sum were said by examiners to be very pathetic,then in a span of 2 weeks min and max 2 months, Takuma managed to pass all test in an avarange level, this improvement speed makes no sense if we take that he took like 10 months to barely reach pathetic level