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Naruto: The Rise of Hinata

Hinata gets banished from the clan and got her eyes stolen. A entity takes pity on her and gives her a gift.

DaoOfDough · Anime & Comics
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2 Chs

Chapter 1

(Hinata POV)

Pain. That's what I felt every time my father called me a failure.

Pain. That's what I felt every time my parents beat me for not being strong enough.

Pain. That's what I was feeling now.

My father banished me from the clan for being too weak. I understood, I mean I even lost to my sister who is younger than me. I knew I would be kicked out soon but not this soon, I mean I'm only 10.

My father was running after me with my mother. I was scared and in so much pain. My mother caught up to me and immobilized me with the gentle fist. She held me up by my hair and brought me to my father. My father looked at me with disgust.

"You disgusting pest, how dare you resist? Someone who isn't apart of the hyuga clan doesn't deserve those eyes." He said it coldly as if he were talking to a insignificant ant.

He drew his hands closer to my face and removed the seal on the top of my head. He then proceeded to rip my eyes out.

After that I couldn't see. I felt scared. I felt alone. I need somebody to help me, please!

...Nobodies helping me. I see, heroes only help princesses and i'm not one anymore.

I felt a hand to the back of my neck and felt my consciousness fade.

(Hiashi POV)

This trash actually tried to run away from her punishment. It's all her fault. My brother died because of her. The hyuga name is tarnished because of her. Her mother died because of her. I don't know why I didn't throw away that trash before because she is the reason for everything that's went wrong since she was born.

I pick her up and walk out of the compound. I throw her in some random ally. I hope she dies painfully, that bitch.

I walk back to my 'wife'. She the women I hooked up with after my wife died. Hinata calls her 'mother', which is a dishonor to her real mothers name.

(??? POV)

Poor child. Maybe I should help her. What should I give her? A system? nah. A tailed beast? nah. What else would be interesting? Maybe I should let the readers decide? Yeah, that sounds right.

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What should I give her? A power that lets her get more powerful the more pain she feels? Zenkai boost? Evolving weapon? Group Chat? Tenseigan? System(What kind)? The power of evolution(Like a weaker Doomsday)? Ghost of the dead hokages? The 100 million year buttons(100 million years in a separated space that has all the essentials to live and lets her train without aging.)?

Or do you want a different power? Comment here for different power and what you want it to be. The one with the most likes or votes will get picked.