visxiin
As an author I’ll try to be as unbiased as I can. The writing quality is very understandable and there are little to no grammatical mistakes. 5 stars. The update stability is good so far I’ve been sticking to three chapters a week and have not run into any problems. 5 stars. The stories development is well paced and Isn’t rushed, I also make sure to add in balanced and real elements into the story. From my perspective I do all I can to make the story progress and develop as efficient as could be. 5 stars IMO The character design IMO isn’t the greatest in the world and you probably won’t like the MC but his thoughts and actions are understandable as well as respectable, I’ll rate it 4 stars. The world’s background is made completely by Kishimoto, all I do is expand on everything he’s created so therefore I give this aspect 3 stars. This isn’t a master piece at all, and it’s a fanfic so here goes my opinion on the stories rate.
i Drop, the author says that the MC is cold, but not a psychopath, mentally ill (the size of the monster you have to be to look into your mother's eyes and say that you love her and at the same time think of her death as an ingredient of I'm making this criticism because I wouldn't have read it if I had a psychopathic tag
4.8 this should do it. everything I read up.until.chapter 4 made me want onread more. the design and how the author laid all the platforms amd events and secenes is just upright good. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AUTHOR!!! AND DON'T FREAKING DROP THIS BOOK YOU'RE GONNA LET A LOT OF PEOPLE DOWN NLW IF YOU WILL IN THE FUTURE.
If only he could unlock his sharingan through an extremely love. Not extremely hate. One thing that I hate is the beginning of the novel, there is no detail. I couldn't understand what his power is. And suddenly author reveals one by one along with progression of the story. That is so ridiculous for me and stupid too. He was a dark scientist but not using his ability on efficient way.