Review Detail of Idealist in Naruto: Reborn As Sasuke
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If only he could unlock his sharingan through an extremely love. Not extremely hate. One thing that I hate is the beginning of the novel, there is no detail. I couldn't understand what his power is. And suddenly author reveals one by one along with progression of the story. That is so ridiculous for me and stupid too. He was a dark scientist but not using his ability on efficient way.
Naruto: Reborn As Sasuke
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can you elaborate? I understand what you mean by not understanding the “power” he’s imparted early on. That’s something I’ll change and make clear & percise because I get it a lot. The only reason he doesn’t perform scientific experiments or anything “scientific related” is because he’s three years old, plus he focuses strictly on increasing his Shinobi siill and everything inbetween throughout his childhood. That way he’ll be ahead and have a sturdier foundation as a Genin or Shinobi overall later down the line, as opposed to his “rookie” skill in canon surpassing that bordering Jōnin skill levels. Since he’s three years old without much freedom and for me as an Author along with how I plan to set up this fanfic, him being “scientific” wouldn’t really work out so early on, though I plan for him and Orochimaru to work in cahoots and make HUGE discoveries and breakthroughs through his modern day science, ideas and things he’s picked up and learned in the Narutoverse. So I understand the concern of MC not using his “power” and just working for it under different pretexts, such as training relentlessly like a maniac sorta like Might Guy or Rock Lee. However I don’t have a problem at all with the rating itself but more so the reasoning because It is my duty as an Author to adhear to my readers complaints and steadily work in attempt to make this ff (fanfiction) as enjoyable as possible. Looking forward to having this discussion with you and thanks for supporting this book, much love!!
visxiin:can you elaborate? I understand what you mean by not understanding the “power” he’s imparted early on. That’s something I’ll change and make clear & percise because I get it a lot. The only reason he doesn’t perform scientific experiments or anything “scientific related” is because he’s three years old, plus he focuses strictly on increasing his Shinobi siill and everything inbetween throughout his childhood. That way he’ll be ahead and have a sturdier foundation as a Genin or Shinobi overall later down the line, as opposed to his “rookie” skill in canon surpassing that bordering Jōnin skill levels. Since he’s three years old without much freedom and for me as an Author along with how I plan to set up this fanfic, him being “scientific” wouldn’t really work out so early on, though I plan for him and Orochimaru to work in cahoots and make HUGE discoveries and breakthroughs through his modern day science, ideas and things he’s picked up and learned in the Narutoverse. So I understand the concern of MC not using his “power” and just working for it under different pretexts, such as training relentlessly like a maniac sorta like Might Guy or Rock Lee. However I don’t have a problem at all with the rating itself but more so the reasoning because It is my duty as an Author to adhear to my readers complaints and steadily work in attempt to make this ff (fanfiction) as enjoyable as possible. Looking forward to having this discussion with you and thanks for supporting this book, much love!!image