Review Detail of visxiin in Naruto: Reborn As Sasuke
Review detail
As an author I’ll try to be as unbiased as I can. The writing quality is very understandable and there are little to no grammatical mistakes. 5 stars. The update stability is good so far I’ve been sticking to three chapters a week and have not run into any problems. 5 stars. The stories development is well paced and Isn’t rushed, I also make sure to add in balanced and real elements into the story. From my perspective I do all I can to make the story progress and develop as efficient as could be. 5 stars IMO The character design IMO isn’t the greatest in the world and you probably won’t like the MC but his thoughts and actions are understandable as well as respectable, I’ll rate it 4 stars. The world’s background is made completely by Kishimoto, all I do is expand on everything he’s created so therefore I give this aspect 3 stars. This isn’t a master piece at all, and it’s a fanfic so here goes my opinion on the stories rate.
Naruto: Reborn As Sasuke
visxiin
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VoidZ:Keep writing this is a naruto fanction that im actually able to read and not cringe at. Look forward to more chapters 👌🏻
DriedSnug:Are you going skip the bridge arc? Trust me have read this to much it gets meh.🧐🤔image
About the first C+ mission naruto gets to build the bridge, fights zabuza and kaku blablabla. Just and case I only want to know to prepare emotionally and mentally.😂🤣
visxiin:Can you elaborate on what you mean?
DriedSnug:About the first C+ mission naruto gets to build the bridge, fights zabuza and kaku blablabla. Just and case I only want to know to prepare emotionally and mentally.😂🤣image
Don’t worry I’ll be patience until their more chapter and thanks for taking time to answering questions.🧐🤔
visxiin:Yeah that still happens 😂
writer-san could you take a question from me? I started reading his fanfic because the synopsis speaks of an evil MC, however when I was disappointed when he was affected by Naruto's protagonist aura. so i would like to know whether or not it is a story with an evil protagonist or do you plan to make him a beta MC?
Nope, he doesn’t help Naruto in any way. I’ll remove that part since it moves readers the wrong way.
NEETsemsalvasao:writer-san could you take a question from me? I started reading his fanfic because the synopsis speaks of an evil MC, however when I was disappointed when he was affected by Naruto's protagonist aura. so i would like to know whether or not it is a story with an evil protagonist or do you plan to make him a beta MC?
yeah atleast don't make him passive as my image of uchia is cool ( will read it as I find synopsis interesting )
visxiin:Nope, he doesn’t help Naruto in any way. I’ll remove that part since it moves readers the wrong way.image
yo author you made it kind of confusing in chapter 5 you said ge might get with a girl if she is strong enough bloodline wise and have kids but you also said raising kids is too much work you basically said yes I will and no I won't have a love life sowill there be romance aka a pairing or not?? I love action stories with romance so it would not be as enjoyable if there is no pairing.
When the MC was saying that he was going on a unsure tangent, it doesn’t mean anything. I can’t Indefinitely say, it truly depends on the story itself. If it leans to romance then yes, if not then no. It also depends on what works with the story and how it fits with the MC’s mood during the time period a cluster of “relationships” may form. short answer: yes and no. maybe. possibly. good chance that their might be romance & a good chance their might not. 🤷♀️
Shadow_Dark240:yo author you made it kind of confusing in chapter 5 you said ge might get with a girl if she is strong enough bloodline wise and have kids but you also said raising kids is too much work you basically said yes I will and no I won't have a love life sowill there be romance aka a pairing or not?? I love action stories with romance so it would not be as enjoyable if there is no pairing.