Reviews of Naruto: Infinite Dream

Since no one will write a review ill write one Warning, I'm new at this, grammar will be wrong, but I will still try in the end. It's set in the Naruto world. I forgot a lot about it but ill still try; you people can tell me what I did wrong and what I can improve in the story. Well, I hope you enjoy my story and if you don't tell me why if you want. No hare or romance btw so don't expect it he will be evil tho I'm going to have to put the # tags for people to know ill put some in soon

not bad at all, thank u also for skipping the wish chapter. Also I would not give up on this novel until it reaches 11 chapters as it would show for web novel readers when u scroll.

I like the work. Your thought process is on par but your chapters are short and in 6 chapters you've only covered him being reborn with meaningless scenes of Itachi and Minato. It doesn't add any value to the story. Also why go about so convolutedly to make friends with Naruto? Also don't forget he likely has ANBU/Root around him or even the hokage with his crystal ball. Anyway just be careful of those loopholes. I'll reserve my opinion till I read more chapters.

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