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Naruto: Betray Konoha At The Start

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What is Naruto: Betray Konoha At The Start

Read Naruto: Betray Konoha At The Start fanfiction written by the author Akane_Tempest on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Anime & Comics fanfic stories, covering reincarnation, r18, system, magic, dark. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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This story is about a girl who wants to be on the top of the food chain and does not give a damn about human morals. Watch her exciting journey how she conquers or destroys worlds people See how she kickass sarutobi make kaguya kneel and realise her dream

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Venerable_Far
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This gives me cn fanfic vibes. The bad grammar, the use of escape instead of release, and the horrible plot makes it look like the MC is the only smart one while in a group of sheep. MC is actually pretty dumb. The author downplays ANBU to the point where its just a bunch of idiots with no experience and instead of fighting they start talking to her. Chapters are okay in length but filled with random skills and useless stuff. She has a system but doesn't bother to explain how it came about. Also the mc talks about reaching the top of the food chain but doesn't have that kind of mindset, there are no unique qualities in her personality and no drive that gives any kind of reason as to why she wants to be the strongest. If you want a story about a ruthless mc that gets strong read Dream to Immortality. If you want a CN-translated story with a ruthless MC read Ninja World, I'm not a Human.

Deeep_Walker
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seems like a good start to me, maybe some problems with grammar but nothing is perfect in this world. Overall ,I say its a good fanfic start

ByDefault
ByDefaultLv4ByDefault

It is really interesting, the plot is unique. I didn't notice any glaring grammatical errors but to be fair, I read a lot of bad translations so I'm at a point where I automatically filter out these kinds of things. Overall, I really enjoyed it.

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