Naruto - fanfic

New writer, Mc is the same age of Itachi but Itachi is older by 2 months i think since mc is September 14(my birthday) so yeah do let me know where I can improve so that the next time i write a chapter i make it to a manageable story. I will post a chapter when I had an idea pop up in my head so no schedule, and I'm a new writer who only write for fun