Reviews of Myth Buster in a Fantasy World
Myth Buster in a Fantasy World
Asha_Moirai
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I mean it is definitely a well made plot and everything. I frankly like the little hints of humour here and there. Might I suggest: -A long paragraph of dialogue could be kept in one "". -Each dialogue could be place in a new line, or at least most of the times. Like: He stood up angrily. "How dare you!!" said XYZ With this, the battle was over. I am no one to say this, since I also do the same a lot, but it is just that I was scolded by my teacher so much when I was younger to use these in any narrative, that seeing them not implemented is just sort of triggered. If you know what I mean. It is sort of ingrained in my head.
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