Review Detail of Shadow_Magus in Myth Buster in a Fantasy World
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I mean it is definitely a well made plot and everything. I frankly like the little hints of humour here and there. Might I suggest: -A long paragraph of dialogue could be kept in one "". -Each dialogue could be place in a new line, or at least most of the times. Like: He stood up angrily. "How dare you!!" said XYZ With this, the battle was over. I am no one to say this, since I also do the same a lot, but it is just that I was scolded by my teacher so much when I was younger to use these in any narrative, that seeing them not implemented is just sort of triggered. If you know what I mean. It is sort of ingrained in my head.
Myth Buster in a Fantasy World
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The new line is what I am attempting, that and the soul listings are issues that occur when moving from word processor to inkstone. I currently focus my edits on the soul skill listings. The conversation edits are def something I need to work on, Thanx for bringing it up now instead of chapter 100+. I won't always make those adjustments but will practice getting that into my posting routine. !st book where I define and learn what the soul stone process is. I got 2 other stories in mind that revolved around them and using this book to develop certain back ground ideas. And of course practice writing as I want to reach a point of writing 4+ chapters per day.