PewPewBoomSplash
Writing Quality: Both the grammar and punctuation are on point. The vocabulary doesn't feel limited as well. Stability of Updates: The story has a stable rate of upload; nothing to add here. Story Development: The book is still too new to draw any conclusive opinion. However, it seems to steadily head towards the intended goal. Character Design: I think this is one of the strong points of the novel. The dialogue feels natural and alive. World Background: Again, the book is still new. Despite that, I think it shows promise in that department. I got the impression that there are still many things to uncover.
First i would like to say that the idea of a random system awakening in danger is cliché and is getting boring and illogical it makes ni o sense the user ie host of these systems are never concerned about the source of the system and even if they are they just get the usual 'not sufficient authority' and tend to forget about it and after watching " i hate systems " i just cant ignor it anymore second their was no reason for the parents to die! i dint know why authors make the mc have parents just to die 20 seconds in and the mc isnt shocked or traumatized by this. now people will arguably say its for character development that juat complete bs the guy didn't even feel sad even though he seemingly killed his parents .12 and killing his parents himself if i was there i would have been hateing the system authors in a bid to seem they have a fresh and unique idea they tend to make illogical and foolish thing like making mc be a dinosaur which is again weird why not juts make him vampire or something classic now people will argue that its a new ideo to be different then authors like this should first of all stop using the systems when they aee to lazy to thinkbof something New and use clichés that have been so used that people like me genuinely feel annoyed by them and making him an dino and the guy can change into one seems weird and stupid .
The storyline is definitely the most unique one I have read till now. I do feel bad as well as laugh at the mc who's 12. He had to go through all of these at the age where he's supposed to be chilling :') The grammar is at the point. No argument with that. Got one request, don't destroy the vamps and werewolves:)
Writing Quality: The writing quality is very good, in my humble opinion there are not many that put this much work into decent paragraphing and carefully placing every word. Stability of Updates: I cannot say much about the stability of updates as it is still early to tell. Story Development: The story has a very nice pace, it manages to get your attention within the first chapter and holds on to it very well. Character design: Character design wise I'd say that except the basic names the characters themselves have enough depths to be memorable. World Background: Again it is to early to tell, time can show in the process what the background is like. Until now the world feels very real and immersive. It is definitely a must read!