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AWHavoc

AWHavoc

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2022-04-18 JoinedUnited States
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  • AWHavoc
    AWHavoc1yr
    Replied to SHADOWBLADE

    oops, thank you

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    Infinite Resurrections in the Zombie Apocalypse
    Horror · AWHavoc
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  • AWHavoc
    AWHavoc1yr
    Replied to Joedson_Santana

    I genuinely appreciate the feedback, thank you.

    Ch 19 Thank You (R18)
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    Infinite Resurrections in the Zombie Apocalypse
    Horror · AWHavoc
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  • AWHavoc
    AWHavoc1yr
    Replied to Ryukurou

    Thank you! That's slipped by for way too long. Will fix it now.

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    Infinite Resurrections in the Zombie Apocalypse
    Horror · AWHavoc
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  • AWHavoc
    AWHavoc1yr
    Posted

    The vivid details and striking balance between narration and dialogue can't help but you'll you in and leave you wanting more! The characters are also lively which creates a suspense that draws you further into the story. I highly recommend you give it a read!

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    Demon Illusionist's Passion
    Fantasy · Yuliaresi_Anjelina
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  • AWHavoc
    AWHavoc1yr
    Replied to Joedson_Santana

    Thank you so much for your kind words!

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    Infinite Resurrections in the Zombie Apocalypse
    Horror · AWHavoc
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  • AWHavoc
    AWHavoc1yr
    Replied to DetectiveHaremCHAD

    There will indeed be harem, but I can't go into much more detail than that.

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    Infinite Resurrections in the Zombie Apocalypse
    Horror · AWHavoc
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  • AWHavoc
    AWHavoc1yr
    Replied to UnreliableJones_

    Thank you for your review!

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    Infinite Resurrections in the Zombie Apocalypse
    Horror · AWHavoc
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  • AWHavoc
    AWHavoc1yr
    Posted

    I'm attempting to read more works of varying genres and the writing quality combined with character's personality, details and expressions throughout led me to be intrigued. I'm curious as to what will happen in the future. Keep it up, author!

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    Forever Dreaming
    Urban · Ashhh_6600
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  • AWHavoc
    AWHavoc1yr
    Posted

    The novel is a terrific execution of a classic theme. The attention to detail and amount of thought put into each chapter really expresses the author's care for this book and allows you to definitely get immersed in it! The characters are fantastically portrayed and so far each seems to have an independent personality. Even the personality of the MC's pet is terrific! The perspective shifts are smooth and not jarring, which allows certain conflict areas in the theme to be addressed as well as the introduction of new characters in a totally natural way that doesn't break immersion. Pacing seems to be on point so far.

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    The Archives Of A Summoner
    Fantasy · MWse
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  • AWHavoc
    AWHavoc1yr
    Replied to Retsag

    Thanks for the review!

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    Infinite Resurrections in the Zombie Apocalypse
    Horror · AWHavoc
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  • AWHavoc
    AWHavoc1yr
    Posted

    The core of the novel is extremely solid, it is entertaining and immersive and it wants to be told. The characters seem lively and depicted well, it's a solid novel. Don't feel like you need to establish authors notes in the middle of a chapter though, as that breaks the immersion. Especially in something as important as a first paragraph which is huge for a novel. If a reader doesn't understand something, we'll ask. Then you can reply to a comment :) The other detractor that I see, which gets better over time in your chapters, is grammar and sentence structure. Every once in awhile it'll get away from you and pull the reader out of the story. I understand English isn't your first language, don't worry, it happens to those of us that have it as a first language all the time. but I do think it would be worth going back through and editing your early chapters (especially the first one as that's what is going to hook new readers) as your skill improves. You're definitely headed in the right direction! Keep up the good work.

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    World conqueror system
    Action · GODOFCAT
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  • AWHavoc
    AWHavoc1yr
    Posted

    I've never read a historical isekai before, but it is extremely intriguing. The setting is perfectly placed and the comedy is slid into the chapters without feeling forced. You'll love this work.

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    Moon Under My Gloam
    Fantasy · naidxcr
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  • AWHavoc
    AWHavoc1yr
    Posted

    Lots of great attention to detail and wonderful execution in the writing of this novel. It's a great piece of work that I highly recommend you read!

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    Stealing The Protagonist’s Yandere Lovers
    Fantasy · Sheizzcoldasice
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  • AWHavoc
    AWHavoc1yr
    Posted

    interesting and well thought out work that should prove entertaining to anyone that reads it, regardless of genre preferences. I think it's a work that'll stand the test of time and truly shine as the author brings out more chapters!

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    The Billionaire's Stubborn Beauty
    Urban · Emmy_Thomson
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  • AWHavoc
    AWHavoc1yr
    Posted

    great story with a great premise! Hoping to see even more wonderful work from this author! The background is solid and the updating is stable.

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    The Mysterious Evolution
    Sci-fi · Biva
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  • AWHavoc
    AWHavoc1yr
    Posted

    I highly recommend reading this book! The attention to detail and vivid story telling allows you to fully experience the story at hand and allows for a wonderful journey. You won't be disappointed!

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    No More Fantasy
    Fantasy · Retsag
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  • AWHavoc
    AWHavoc1yr
    Posted

    great concept with vivid details that allow one to get fully immersed into the story. The pacing seems appropriate for the length of the novel so far and I think it has huge potential!

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    The shadow of dead.
    Fantasy · Surbhi_mithil
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  • AWHavoc
    AWHavoc1yr
    Posted

    Please allow my shameless author review! I hope you enjoy my novel as I attempt to write something far outside my comfort zone here. I hope you enjoy it while it happens.

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    Infinite Resurrections in the Zombie Apocalypse
    Horror · AWHavoc
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  • AWHavoc
    AWHavoc1yr
    Posted

    Read the book, its about a guy that can turn into a dinosaur that's hooking up with a vampire what more could you want in your life?! seriously?

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    My Were-Rex System
    Fantasy · PewPewBoomSplash
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  • AWHavoc
    AWHavoc1yr
    Replied to bananamAn312

    venison is deer meat

    Ch 1167 I҉ k҉n҉o҉w҉ t҉h҉a҉t҉ y҉o҉u҉'r҉e҉ t҉h҉e҉r҉e҉
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    Realistic · OneFist
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