HeavenlyRayofLight
Man, why didn't I discovered this more early?! I don't want to talk about how he amazingly wrote the synopsis but, what's with this high quality?! No, you don't want to miss reading this. Just reading the synopsis will tell you already about what will happen in the story. I'm not professional in giving advices. In my opinion, this book is underrated! Sigh, good work there, author. You wrote the story fluently. Amazing!
The story has much more potential than it seems to have. The author just needs to pay a bit more attention towards the background story building. The pace is fine and so are the character descriptions. I ignored the grammatical errors as who does pay attention to those when you have a unique story to catch on. Struggling polishes a person, keep up the hard work!