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The story has much more potential than it seems to have. The author just needs to pay a bit more attention towards the background story building. The pace is fine and so are the character descriptions. I ignored the grammatical errors as who does pay attention to those when you have a unique story to catch on. Struggling polishes a person, keep up the hard work!

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My Path Continues As: A Healer on Another World

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Thank you very much! I've already thought of the end of this story, so I also agree with you regarding it's potential. It's quite hard to work on the background story building, but I'm working on it. Thank you very much!