The pacing of the novel is good and there might some grammar errors but you can fix that as long as you use some tools for editing and proofreading. The summary is well-written but if you want more readers to attract, might as well change your book cover. You can use free stock images from the website or temporary use images from Pinterest just to attract the audience. Keep up on writing! ^_^
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