hidingpanduh
I like all of the author's books they're intriguing and I could learn some things from them when it comes to writing. Her writing style is amazingđ I would recommend you read her works they're all very fantastic. Even the author is friendly and kind. I can't even describe this properly in words. I'm also a big fan of vampire tropes so I like it very much!
The story started with a high spirit! I love the opening line as if it was pacing the setting for the whole book. The character development is nice and at times it feels so real. Maybe for that I should give you the credit. Your writing style engages a person. Even though there are only 5 chapters, I am eager to read more! Do write more. XOXO
ok, I will start from world-building - the story is weaving open the world matching with the pace of the plot is unraveling which is beautifully done. There are no info-dumps or extras thrown by Author to overwhelm Readers. Second - Valeri, the protagonist, is an analogous personality to state the story in the first person along with our male lead - Avalon, who is not yet given much screen time but I am hoping he would do justice to our lovely female lead. On the other hand, Other characters are quite predictable with an overprotective yet loving father, a kind female playing mother role, etc. My simple advice to the author since there aren't many chapters released right now is to introduce some unique or unpredictable thing to make this story fare different from other romance ones. But in the end, the Novel is wonderful till now and I will be looking out for future chapters...
The description in this novel is so vivid it is amazing! I completely lost myself in the reading to the point that when I ran out of chapters it actually took a moment to realize that there wasn't any more and it wasn't a case of me doing something wrong! The pacing is impeccable as well. I'm new to the genre and this is the novel that guaranteed my interest. It's definitely going into my library.
I am honestly surprised by how much I like this book. I usually dislike stories written in the first-person POV but I really like this one. The characterisation is good, the story development is good and the description is quite vivid. Please keep up the good work and good luck on WPC. Waiting for chapter 6.