My Angel system
In old times a boy named Luis had lost his parents at a very tender age, he never even got to know who his parents were. With his parents gone he had to be taken care of by his wicked aunt who hardly fed him once a day, in effort to get food Luis was adviced to steal by a strange book without minding the punishment of burning given to thieves. When Luis was caught he ran into the forest and the villagers including his aunt chased him down with torches. "I think it's best I surrender now" Luis stopped running and was panting now. "I think I can see him!" he heard the village blacksmith shout. He took a little step backwards and down a hole he went. "Noooooo!!!" Luis screamed as he went down the hole, the last thing he saw was a red glowing light and then it was lights out for him. "What happened?" Luis groaned. "Where am I? And why is my body so cold" he said touching his arm" A screen appeard in front of him. [ System revived ] "What?" That was where the true journey began. Now the fate of mankind lies in his hands as he keeps completing tasks and quests to get stronger. Luis keeps getting stronger but the question is: Will he be able to stop Lucifer? Join my discord channel for more info about the novel. https://discord.gg/7DvJCBfvSy Also if you have time, you can check out The Angel System by ECM Manga.
Only One Point
Luis stared at the pebble-sized tree in amazement, he was expecting Johnny to get back his strength ability just like Fred got back his water ability but that didn't seem to be the case as the Demi-Angel had gotten a whole new ability.
The ability was new in two ways, the first one being that it was replacing Johnny's strength ability and the second way being that it was the first time any of them were seeing such an ability.
'That is going to be a problem.' Luis thought.
If Johnny had gotten back his formal ability just like Fred did then keeping what he had become a secret wasn't going to be so hard, but now that he had gotten a new and somehow terrifying ability, he could easily get figured out.
"Hey, what did you do? That's not his ability." Fred said.
"Keep quiet, I can see that," Luis said and just like he said Fred couldn't say anything again and the only thing he could do was shoot daggers at the Angel as he walked closer to Johnny.