Reviews of MULTIVERSEL CAFE
MULTIVERSEL CAFE
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A good start. I like how the mc died. It's good to die at the age of 104 Lots of potential Keep it up and don't drop the story. Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
The story starts off with, no offence, shitty grammar. Of course, it smooths out later in the chapter. (that, or I just learned to ignore it, Im leaning towards the former though) But yeah, it got quite a few laughs out of me which is suprising because I dont do that often. If you can get over the first few chapters of shitty grammar, give it a read, very good.
This book has been a fun read so far. I really like the interactions between the heroes and our friendly cafe running multiverse god. So far (chapter 17) there has been a good mix of humor and full on trolling by the MC. Keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing more. There have not been any major issues with grammar. I have had no issues at all in understanding what is going on or who is talking or why something was done. Updates have been extremely awesome. I have seen anywhere from 1-4 per day since you started releasing chapters. Thanks for the hard work!
