The_Bored_Immortal
Way too bored to be alive, way too bored to kill myself, way too bored to care for grammar. Beta Reader/Editor Email: immortaleditorial@gmail.com For details, shoot me an email!
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The_Bored_Immortal19dReplied to La_AtlantisThey're Serafell and Yasaka, I honestly adore their dynamic. Even though the idea of romance is introduced relatively late in the fic I find that it's integrated very well into the story. I highly recommend this book though I would prefer you read it on the original site(or app) fanfiction.net under the same name
- The_Bored_Immortal1mthReplied to P_J_Sch
Honestly it's only good if you're looking for a complete power fantasy and not much else. If you're looking for something that will flesh out the characters and engage you in the story, try something else.
If anyone tries to screw with us. We will burn them alive. Diodora's dead if he even comes anywhere close to her. - The_Bored_Immortal1mthReplied to VOID_321
Grammar is kinda trash, the cannon gets derailed to the extreme from what I remember. It's at least worth a read in my opinion
Sai, an 18-year old, only child of the family, living in Bengaluru, India. He had just come out of the movie theater with his friends after watching the latest Marvel movie Eternals. Before he had gone for the movie he was excited because of the fact that after a long time, he watched MCU movie and as an avid MCU fan he loved it. Despite that, after watching it he felt that the movie needed a more emotional aspect yet he didn't have any prejudice against the story being an origin movie. Marvel hasn't produced any good origin movies recently except for Shang-Chi which was debatable. Eternals could have been a good one, but it needed more depth. - The_Bored_Immortal1mthReplied to lvl30dragon
For all intents and purposes, in this situation at least, it doesn't matter at all how I refer to it. Of course I know the difference between weight and mass, but my point still stood regardless. My worry was addressed in like the next paragraph anyway,
She activated it, causing energy to appear from one flat surface of the cylinder, forming a sword in an instant. The sword was around a metre in length and had a breadth of three centimetres. She lightly swung it once, saying, "The primary advantage of this is that there is no weight to these weapons. So, you can wield them without any muscle strain for longer durations than wielding a conventional weapon." - The_Bored_Immortal2mthReplied to The_Bored_Immortal
May I add, Κύριε ελέησον Κύριε ελέησον ο παπάς τρελάθηκε και παίζει πλεϊστέσιον
"Kyrie Eleison." With that, the demon breaks into pieces, and his body melts into pure negative energy that is then absorbed by the shattered black key shards, which then disappear from sight. The energy then disperses as I take a breath and see the rest of the cultists staring at me in awe, to which I go over to them and place my hand on one of their shoulders. - The_Bored_Immortal2mthCommented
*the fenix->the Phoenix
Even the power of Marco [The Fenix] was shown to have limits in his regeneration in the Onigashima war! - The_Bored_Immortal2mthReplied to ALEX1402
That's exactly what this paragraph is saying
In Marvel, there is also a Hercules and an Ares, but compared to Marvel's, DC's are more despicable. - The_Bored_Immortal2mthCommented
It's not really a problem, but I do find portraying actual, living people fairly weird. Especially if that portrayal is in a negative or demeaning light
(A/N: Megan Fox is young in this universe, she's in her twenties at this moment.) - The_Bored_Immortal2mthReplied to MrLemure
I realised the error of my ways lol ┐(´ー｀)┌
[Blue Grade Ability: Tenth of Kizaru's speed] - The_Bored_Immortal2mthReplied to MrLemure
Yeah, you're probably right. But I believe we don't need to scientifically analyse One Piece of all things lol
[Blue Grade Ability: Tenth of Kizaru's speed] - The_Bored_Immortal2mthCommented
Yippee
On The Run - The_Bored_Immortal2mthCommented
Aight...this threw me for a loop lol. Didn't expect to see a greek name here, and what a name it is
Avalanche, whose real name is Dominikos Ioannis Petrakis, is one of the most committed to Magneto's cause for the good of all mutants. His mutant ability allows him to generate and control seismic waves, as well as manipulate the earth and rocks around him. He uses these abilities to cause earthquakes and destruction, becoming a formidable force on the battlefield. - The_Bored_Immortal2mthReplied to MrLemure
That wouldn't be the case though, to travel at the speed of light he would have to completely turn into photons, particles without mass. So him moving at that speed wouldn't affect his surroundings
[Blue Grade Ability: Tenth of Kizaru's speed] - The_Bored_Immortal2mthCommented
Eh, it can be good if done correctly. Often there is a need to pre-establish a character without jumping directly to action or an exposition dialogue, a backstory is a good way to do that
This story is similar in that regard, but unlike other stories, it doesn't give a shit about the life the soul had before it died. Not even the particular way the soul died is important because who cares about that when he could have another chance at life? - The_Bored_Immortal2mthCommented
I knew it from the start, but it's still really funny
Horizon sighs, "fine, how many of my bones do you need?" - The_Bored_Immortal2mthReplied to Rex_Xenovius1998
You'll be happy to know that this already exists! The constitution states that in order to run for senate you need to be at least thirty years of age as well as have been a US citizen for at least 9 years. Personally I would prefer the age requirement be lowered to 25 but I'd be satisfied if it remained the same.
He preferred the first one, but I knew it was always the second as there must always be a clear and defined hierarchy, or else there is chaos. It's why whenever I read about the various political philosophies of my other prospective students, I can never understand Socialism or democracy as it would seem too slow and too susceptible to corruption. - The_Bored_Immortal2mthCommented
Oh interesting that would be "Μια φτηνή απομίμηση του ποτού που γεμίζει την κούπα του Διόνυσου" at least in modern greek
Didi shook her head, "Not technically divine. It's the mortal world's best attempt at making Divine Ambrosia. The Ancient Greek on the front says 'A poor imitation of the drink that fills Dionysus' cups'. Paraphrased, of course. But the Greeks were well aware of their mortal limits so 'poor imitation' is accurate." - The_Bored_Immortal2mthCommented
There are so many reasons that Gotham's just like that, one would be Dr. Gotham
My time in Gotham didn't pass quietly but it passed all the same. Uneventful was practically anathema for the city. It had to be something in the water. Or the quite literally cursed Indian burial ground the city was built atop. Or maybe Gotham was just 'LIKE THAT'. My money was on all three at once.