Review Detail of DJDAN in MULTIVERSEL CAFE

The story starts off with, no offence, shitty grammar. Of course, it smooths out later in the chapter. (that, or I just learned to ignore it, Im leaning towards the former though) But yeah, it got quite a few laughs out of me which is suprising because I dont do that often. If you can get over the first few chapters of shitty grammar, give it a read, very good.