Ink_Quanta
To be honest story is intersting, the worls is about oceans its hard to screw that kind of worlds but the only problem is characters. Ali trusting to stranger with his whole live and he only meet with him 3 seconds ago characters feel like doing things because why not There is no other problem i find and i writed a honest rewiev
Although it doesn't have many chapters but what l came to know after reading those chapters are that its a very philosophical novel.... And its not my type of book as l don't understand these kind of thing.... BUT IT DOESN'T MEAN I DON'T RECOMMEND THIS BOOK TO OTHER who like to read philosophical books or heavy themes.... Author's mind set is very unique l must say.... Keep going author... I hope u gonna try writting some light so that people like me can read and enjoy.... Thank u....
As some have already noted, the format of the work is not that of a novel. If the author intended for this style, then I must admit this is not something in line with the works of webnovel, so it may not be everyone's cup of tea. Though there is a message one can bring out of reading this work, I'm afraid the format holds it back for the majority of the possible readers. Good luck with your future endeavors, author.
Not really my cup of tea. Author tried to deliver a lesson to the readers. Which was ok, this was more like of a simple short story than a novel. If one day you feel like reading something that has some philosophy sense you could spent sometime reading this. The story was pretty short so it won't take much time.