Didn't expect to find a mystery novel in our website. Usually they all turn out to be isekai in disguise. Very good book keep it up author! Can't wait for more.

After so long I finally found such an interesting romance novel to kill my free time! It only took me 3 chapters to like the FL. Very hilarious FL I love her! The pacing was also good. I can't believe this's the author first work.

I like FL already.

Drink more water FMC

Dead by facepalm

The story is good. I really like the relationship between FMC and her husband. And chapter 5... uh oh that was pretty hot. There's some grammar mistakes, I hope the author'll do some grammar update later on.

Shameless cutest author here. Following the tradition, I give my novel 5 stars. Whether this novel is truly good or not, it's your decision. I'll try my best to improve the quality and the release speed (No promise though :D cute author is busy).

Not really my cup of tea. Author tried to deliver a lesson to the readers. Which was ok, this was more like of a simple short story than a novel. If one day you feel like reading something that has some philosophy sense you could spent sometime reading this. The story was pretty short so it won't take much time.

This is just my personal opinion, so judge it on your own. Just like the title indicated, the story was very chaotic I don't know if the author deliberated on this or it was just very weird situations and conversations. I don’t know anything about Muslim but Mr.Beck situation was very strange. And why did those 2 strange men suddenly become his guards and why did he instantly accept to be their boss no question ask, that was very weird. Mr.Bee was kidnapped by a stranger, but then he just casually sipped tea without any sign of panic. Mr Beck. who turned out to be Mr Bee dad, and then Mr.Bee just accepted it?? The father he has never seen in his life and he just casually accept the man who hurt and kidnaped him? But then why does he have to smack his son on the head? Couldn’t they just have a normal conversation somewhere (I guess if Mr.Bee didn’t turn out to be his son he would kill him? If he needed the hair for DNA test there are many way to get it ) How can a regular officer said he could erase every charges on Mr.Beck? The conversations between characters were too long. This style was very hard to read and comprehend. Again, I don't know anything about Muslim but religious and political aspects shouldn't be mentioned directly. Even if you feel you have to, you should at least change the name of the religion/country or something like that.

Thank you for the power stones

Uhm... about the first one MC was taken by the bad guy yes. He said he was no longer pure, the bad guy did say something about inserting .... you know but what's really happened, only the mc and the guy know, I just put some hint to it. But was that even important though. The second one, sorry but I'm not going to say anything or it's gonna spoiled many situations in the later chapters. The third one... the 'curse'. I assume you was talking about the painful feeling whenever he got hurt. I remember the Mc said that he took the pain killer many times, There were and will be some implicit details in the story. I don't want to just narrate every single thing that happens. This style of writing might not be suitable for speed reading reader like you, but thanks for reading my story.

In the comic Tatsumi might be able to beat Esdeath. He could even move in her frozen time. He could evolve nonstop at the cost of becoming a monster. Akame's teigu is normally just like a normal sword coated with poison. It won't work if she couldn't get a cut. Akame could beat Esdeath because she herself was already strong. I don't think Tasumi could do that if he held Murasame. Murasame's ultimate gave her a great buff but it came with a cost and I don't think she can use it anymore (spoiler Akame sequel Hinowa ga Yuku)

Yep, he kind of looks something like that but smaller cause he's only 12. Maybe it's time for me to practice drawing.

Good start, good writing skill, a fantasy world and levelling concept but has serious vibe. I can't believe this the work of a new author. Slow and steady pace but I got the feeling that it gonna build up something epic. Hope the author keep up with the writing quality.

Ahhhh I missed this book. It was so good that I hired another guy to date with my girlfriend so that I could have some time to read it. Pls don't drop it author or I kill you.

Very open concept and interesting plot progression so far. Although it has a system but not a typical Korean RPG Dungeon. I got hooked by the steady execution of the story. The characters behaviours and thoughts were on point, (it didn't feel like reading an otaku gamer mc boosted with power care nothing but himself). I hope author can keep up with the quality, can't wait for more release.

Captain marvel noo!! Although Cree probably won't but I will miss you!

For now they are only friends or rather those girl are in the other guy harem. The MC have harem or not still haven't decided.

System with apocalypse, very intersting. Not overpowerd MC at the start but nice character development. Can't wait for more please keep it up!