As some have already noted, the format of the work is not that of a novel. If the author intended for this style, then I must admit this is not something in line with the works of webnovel, so it may not be everyone's cup of tea. Though there is a message one can bring out of reading this work, I'm afraid the format holds it back for the majority of the possible readers. Good luck with your future endeavors, author.
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