Reviews of Monster Hunter: Wyvern's Wrath

I intend this Fan-Fic to be practice so that when I move into writing my own original novels, I don't have to suck so bad. XD Tell me how you feel about it and where I can improve. As long as it's constructive and helps me as a writer, I can take it all. Feel free to comment on any potential monsters you may want the MC to fight in the future. As long as I can fit it into the lore of the Monster Hunter Universe. It works.

This is one of the first fanfics that ive read that actually take place in mhw and i really enjoyed the world building and the characters and the way you explained palicos and the Hunters Criteria for recruitment

Where’s the next chapter? Where’s the next chapter? Where’s the next chapter? Where’s the next chapter? Where’s the next chapter? Where’s the next chapter? Where’s the next chapter? Where’s the next chapter? Where’s the next chapter? Where’s the next chapter? Agh! Oh well.. good story... Where’s the next chapter?