Kileks
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Kileks8dCommentedOnly the best kind!
And which fire safety company uses a tranquiliser dart to knock someone out?- Kileks1mthReplied to Animofriend
I didn't even know Germany existed until I was like 11, so no. ;)
This time, when he woke up, Theo did not feel as weak as before. With a good night's sleep, he felt better. He then stands up, realizing that the Red fox was not in the Den and he decides to leave the Den too. - Kileks2mthReplied to Yaadman
Nope. This one is a lot more menacing.
"HUNTERS ON ME!!!" A voice yelled out just as loudly as the Wyverns' own. It was Velk's grandfather. "DRINK YOUR COOL DRINKS AND USE FIREPROOF MANTLES." His voice was booming. Everyone within the village could catch it even over the thunder and rain. It wasn't overbearing, like the wyvern's, but it did get the point across. - Kileks2mthReplied to Yaadman
A fair guess, but no. These are shiny rocks, not decorative charms.
His grandfather then proceeded to grab a sapphire gem, shaped like a star, radiating vitality, light, and power. He brought it towards Velk's face, not revealing any acknowledgment towards the longing for praise within Velk's bright blue orbs. "This is a very, very, very important gem. It can never be shown to others. Do you understand me?" - Kileks2mthReplied to OldDaoistTruly
"Not really" - ODT, in response to "The current is fine" - Kileks, and then following it up with "never said it was a must." - ODT. By telling the audience that the current dialogue is not fine, you are therefore saying that it's incorrect and that using the correction you graciously provided is a must for it to be fixed! Do you understand or MUST I simplify my language?
"You came early. Everything at home alright, Jeffery?" said Pierce, a ministry guard, sitting behind the security counter with a puzzle book in his hand as he leaned on the back of his chair, making it stand on its two hind legs with forelegs dangling in the air. - Kileks2mthReplied to OldDaoistTruly
In case you couldn't tell, that was checkmate. Drop the subject, you're contradicting yourself.
"You came early. Everything at home alright, Jeffery?" said Pierce, a ministry guard, sitting behind the security counter with a puzzle book in his hand as he leaned on the back of his chair, making it stand on its two hind legs with forelegs dangling in the air. - Kileks2mthReplied to OldDaoistTruly
There are a couple of reasons why this is a nonissue. Firstly, it's dialogue. Not every character will live up to the linguistic standards that are common at all times. Secondly, the intent of the statement made it to base. Everyone understood what was being said without going through any mental gymnastics. Lastly, just because something makes you uncomfortable, doesn't mean it's wrong. Running twenty kilometers makes me uncomfortable, but I'd be hard pressed to find someone telling me I shouldn't do it. Yes, your 'correction' is how people tend to say it, but not everyone does, and neither should they be expected to in this situation. Be quiet, eat your popcorn, and enjoy!
"You came early. Everything at home alright, Jeffery?" said Pierce, a ministry guard, sitting behind the security counter with a puzzle book in his hand as he leaned on the back of his chair, making it stand on its two hind legs with forelegs dangling in the air. - Kileks2mthReplied to OldDaoistTruly
Explain
"You came early. Everything at home alright, Jeffery?" said Pierce, a ministry guard, sitting behind the security counter with a puzzle book in his hand as he leaned on the back of his chair, making it stand on its two hind legs with forelegs dangling in the air. - Kileks2mthReplied to OldDaoistTruly
The current is fine
"You came early. Everything at home alright, Jeffery?" said Pierce, a ministry guard, sitting behind the security counter with a puzzle book in his hand as he leaned on the back of his chair, making it stand on its two hind legs with forelegs dangling in the air. - Kileks2mthCommented
amongst the weak will only loosen the ties keeping Skelikland from complete obliteration.
Discourse - Kileks2mthCommentedCh 2313 Discourse
- Kileks4mthReplied to ozyph
I'm disappointed in you.
Before the Test - Kileks4mthReplied to DaoistNovelAddict
That's quite the breeze!
Imminent Danger - Kileks5mthReplied to Jadow
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Affection : Love - Kileks5mthCommented
I don't know how but the, "and that's when everything stopped being good," gave me a good couple of chuckles. Thank you.
"Okay, this is going good," he muttered, and that's when everything stopped being good. Quinn had mastered the part of lifting up from the ground, but what he hadn't got the manoeuvrability down, he couldn't turn or, in fact, move in any direction other than up. For the nth time, he tried to move, but immediately, the winds went out of control, and his ascending body was thrown into a frenzy. - Kileks6mthCommented
from oppression... no. More like freedom from operation depression.
Freedom - Kileks6mthReplied to CkLance
No need to apologize, and yes, I meant personality. (Probably typed that on my phone. xD) I simply don't see him that way. Rarely is he as indecisive as you make him seem, and where the "easily manipulated" comes from is a strong personality trait that has been consistent throughout the entire story, of which is neither positive nor negative; he's just highly empathetic. The numerous women—as you had mentioned—in his life are basically all that consist of his social circle, and he looks to them for guidance on important decisions, as would a king to his advisors, a president to their executive heads, or a friend, simply looking for reassurance. Only the unwise and foolish would fail to do so, notably when one's judgments affect the lives of many, many others. Readers, If you are looking for a story where the protagonist only cares about his own needs and feelings, is a lone wolf, and is all but perfect, then this is probably not where you'll find that. Thank you.
When she released a slight sigh, Vahn looked over even though Ryuu was positive he hadn't heard her. With a smile on his face, Vahn reached out and gingerly grabbed her hand as if he had read her mind. Her heart throbbed a bit, but she just smiled as they walked along the back alleys towards the Hostess of Fertility. Though they hadn't spent much time together, Ryuu knew that Vahn was quite perceptive and she was grateful he had been the one to reach out and grab her hand. It reminded her a lot of the first time they had met and how he was easily able to approach her... - Kileks6mthReplied to CkLance
I don't see your point? You can't just throw numbers around expecting me to understand without elaborating.
When she released a slight sigh, Vahn looked over even though Ryuu was positive he hadn't heard her. With a smile on his face, Vahn reached out and gingerly grabbed her hand as if he had read her mind. Her heart throbbed a bit, but she just smiled as they walked along the back alleys towards the Hostess of Fertility. Though they hadn't spent much time together, Ryuu knew that Vahn was quite perceptive and she was grateful he had been the one to reach out and grab her hand. It reminded her a lot of the first time they had met and how he was easily able to approach her... - Kileks6mthReplied to FictionOnlyReader
Double space after every period perhaps?
FictionOnlyReader - Author - I tried something new. I don't know if it will show up, but if it does. what do you think? - Kileks7mthReplied to WerphCh 15 **Announcement**
