Reviews of Monarch of Gluttony: System of Sin

So far, and 80 chapters are not that much, this novel is one of the best on webnovel. Decent to good grammar, a nice world building, good story telling, character progression, and a lot happening but not too much. Nice pace, too. A hidden gem I would say :)

I think the MC is an idiot of some kind. Don't judge first read it. I don't know about later but it feels like the MC is a 12 to 13-year-old kid. Too much extra talking, too much drama, No hard work is done here. He has only suffered in the first chapter, there was no mention of him trying to learn anything. He is just lucky for no reason. He is still a kid after suffering, as it is said Maturity comes with suffering too. He was too hasty in his decision-making. I don't get it how can a regressor be an idiot? There is no information on Floor 0 or where the commoners are staying is it Earth or is it that earth is destroyed? Too little information before the boss fight! Thanks for reading the review, I hope you think about it. Have a good day 😄.

First of all, I'm not a fan of harem so I'm gonna dropped this when women become stupid after falling in love in the MC and I hate the cliche of hero saves the beauty troupe!!!,and I hope it's not gonna like that cause you know many great novels and especially the novel I like to read get ruined because of it. yeah, I kinda have a prejudice about harem novels, so I'm hoping that it's not gonna be like that because it has the potential to be a great novel for me, and it's pretty unique cause I found it hard to come across a novel with tower setting. feel free to recommend to me a novel with the tower setting! for now, I'm enjoying reading this while skipping some parts where women are mentioned.

The book just started and I can already tell this is gonna be a fun read. I know it’s a bit premature to write a review when only a single chapter has been uploaded but I’m gonna do it anyway. Nothing more to say really, I’ll write a new review later on when more chapters are written.

Not too good. I dont like mc, he is not smart and his decisions sometimes make me cringe. Comedy aspect is lacking. I didnt connect to the characeters

here and I give review better compare to 1 star and this is the real review. this story is bad after reading into 1st chapter. the one thing I hate about mc is her personality. even though I read at 1wt chapter I know where the story will went well. Just read at first chapter. And the world background is quite bad because the author did Chinese novel and Korean novel a cultivation world with technology and a tower! it's exactly what you think so yeah ..

I have to say, the first chapter was well written. I also do like the concept of a sin system, it's very unique. I can say that , from the first chapter and the unique concept, this novel has a lot of potential. You've got my interest, so wil keep an eye out for further chapters.

1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! cedit- owner you that read rong

BRoo author this is some good shii but wryyyyyy it was free 2 days ago now i have to pay to read the rest of the chapters bro wryyy im broke rn🤧

This novel has a lot of potential and I hope it will not be dropped. The book also has a unique tower + seven sins team with there still being many things to add about the world and Mysteries to be uncovered. It's truly packed with many possibilities.

good story, good grammar soooo gooooooooooooooood soooo gooooooooooooooood soooo gooooooooooooooood soooo gooooooooooooooood soooo gooooooooooooooood

This is an amazing book. Word count below, don't read it. We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy  I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand   Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you  We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it Inside, we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it  And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see  Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you        Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you           Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you         Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you  (Ooh, give you up) (Ooh, give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up)  We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it Inside, we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it  I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand  Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you         Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you                   Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you       Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you          Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you       Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

This is one of the best novels on this platform. I can say that only after reading 30 chapters. But I'm unhappy with the author as he didn't upload a single chapter for4 months. Common man. Just takes 30 to 40 min to write a thousand words. Go on, at least write some chapters and I will definitely repost my review with 5star

Overall if you looking for the equivalent to fast food, this is fine. There is lots of power fantasy, future knowledge, super strong follower and no mishaps. 21 chapters in, the writing quality pretty decent but marked low by the constant loopholes/plot armor. The MC goes from being a frail/dumb/cowardly character to a untouchable god(due to constant plot armor/who is lead by a slavelike/fanboy demon he got from his gambling system(even though gluttony has nothing to do with gambling/minions).

The feeling that the story elicits is bleakness. I think this was the intent, the characters that we meet at least in the first 70ish chapters don’t have any redeeming qualities. The setting is barely touched, a third of the chapters read and I can’t make myself care about anything. The tower trope isn’t great, and again 70ish chapters in, this ain’t good example of the trope.

Catch up to chapter 103 as of this review. This hasn’t gotten a lot of attention but it has massive potential. The story setting is TOG tower climb, but it’s a good twist with a lot of mystery. Highly recommend giving it a shot

was good until I had to pay then I lost all interest.

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This story is great good grammar and the author uploads frequently the only thing that sucks is that I have to pay to read more I’ m broke so sucks to be me