Clob_Donoby
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it doesn't. thats the thing. its stated he has/had a sister. This is the place his family is buried in, or at least remembered. There are then two lines. Presumably one for his father and one for his mother. Meaning that his sister is not dead but is also not a part of his life.
Overall if you looking for the equivalent to fast food, this is fine. There is lots of power fantasy, future knowledge, super strong follower and no mishaps. 21 chapters in, the writing quality pretty decent but marked low by the constant loopholes/plot armor. The MC goes from being a frail/dumb/cowardly character to a untouchable god(due to constant plot armor/who is lead by a slavelike/fanboy demon he got from his gambling system(even though gluttony has nothing to do with gambling/minions).
pretty fancy kick for a person who is still inexperienced in combat with a new strength level they've never felt before and have only attacked people with a knife before. especially when you remember it aimed at someone who is only 1/10th weaken then them but has 3 years or training in solo combat
since when is gluttony the gambling sin, this is so dumb
ya, i guess having overwhelming speed making you nigh invincible and being able to kill i what hit is something to be proud of, but its not skill
heal on level up? now thers a plot armor that will be abused later on
where did he get so many knives, one i can understand buy three?
how does he know there strength, only two people have attempted this book and both died
smart, start your training by taking on 20 dark mages.
yes, good. declare that you(someone weak and just starting) wants to kill( one of the strongest people in the area who has 1k+ people at his bidding)
A player receptive to constructive criticism? Ya, i dont think so. this is to far fetched
just because you dont see them, doesnt mean they dont exist
thought this was supposed to be a hyper realistic game
'Cave_Slayer_69_XD_420YOLO' coming right up please and thank you
this convo feels a forced just for a face slap later on
not hard to be brave since if he died he would respawn cuz not lvl 10
which is why he hasnt put a single point in it so far
alright? its insane. to a level 15 it would give 33% more star slots and just over 2 levels of pure constitution
wow. auth needs to calm down