Peter_B_Parker
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FINALLY!!! Someone competent enough to write a decent story. The grammar is perfect, character development is great and the inner monologues are impeccable. The dialogues actually flow through smoothly and don't border on cringy like almost every single fanfic on this platform. All in all, great job with this. The only other Spider Man/SI in MCU that was somewhat decent was the Spider by imjusttryingtofindmyway, before the mc became the very definition of sluttiness. Sincerely hope, that doesn't happen here. Anyways, keep it up.
This story is simply phenomenal. The writing is impeccable and has little to no mistakes on it. The author seems to have a clear plan in mind for the story, so you can rest assured that the story wont go all over the place later on or confuse you. The one thing that's got me slightly and i mean slightly worried, is the fact that MJ would be the love interest and not someone like Gwen Stacy or Scarlet Witch or Jessica Jones, but even if the author does pick MJ, she'll be well written. I have something else to say to the author, would Spider-Man meet up with Jessica Jones/Jewel on patrol and have them become friends?, because I feel like they'd be very good ones. All in all, an amazing story with potential to be one of the best fanfics on here, so definitely read this, and keep it up author.
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You know......... that web always seemed silly to me. I mean the biological spider web from the old movies. You can't be a superhero with a secret identity if you go around town leaving DNA samples all over the place. By the way, the excuse for his added abilities is that the spider is bigger? But why is it bigger? I hope you can explain that, just say your future self left that spider.