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Master of the Omnitrix

"One of the most powerful beings in all fiction whose only weakness is his mentality and plot. " .... "OK then ...." Ben Tennyson. Ben 10. Holder of the Omnitrix. Earth's Greatest Champion. Hero of Heroes . Saviour of the Universe. I got some big shoes to fill since I am , somehow, in his 5 year old body . ..... The Universe is doomed... isn't it. * First Fanfiction. I just felt I should give it a try. Proper Crictism and writing advice is welcome .

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OMAKE: "Redemption."

Author's Note: I have been moving the story along when, in thinking about how Kevin redeamed I had just realized he never did. At least his character never changed until some revelations /retcons. So I thought up a little skitt in between chapters of the story about Kevin's amoral character.

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Meeting

Ben, realizing what's coming up: Kevin, why don't we go on a little trip to my RV? You might even become a Plumber, where you could possibly make your mother proud and so u don't go murder a bunch of people haha?

Kevin, not knowing exactly what's going on: yeah I'd hate to go all Darkside for a while leaving me vulnerable to a evil possible hentai octopus alien who may or may not plan to take over the universe yanno??

Ben: what

Kevin: what

Needing him to hold something

Ben, poking various parts of Kevin's outfit: you got a pocket somewhere here that I can use or what??

Kevin, swatting his hands away: what do you want it for?

Ben: I have some extra credits I need to store for an emergency

Kevin displaying his various hidden pockets: Why didn't u just say so? Listen, I was a alien scavenger. Do u even know what that means? It means I've got a million and one pockets to use.

Where are the credits?

Other

Kevin and Ben: *talk about their problems while not talking about their problems at the same time*

Also

Ben: I'm not gonna let you kill anyone

Kevin: what if I just torture them a little bit

Benn: nO

The real chapters will continue soon. I just wrote this little bit and thought that you would like it. Give me some feedback.

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