Reviews of Marvel: Ultimate Spider-man

Its hard to read.... :( seemed like a cool fanfic but reading it makes me lose braincells so bye!!! .140140140140140140140140140140140140.

Hey author uh please don't drop this even if this book just released I think this book got potential also please tell the reader's or me what time are you gonna update. Thanks! <3

Just waiting for the retarded MC to get mind fucXed now, after wasting his 3rd wish. If he is not snapped out of existence first. Wasted wish, ridiculously stupid death.👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎 This is also an extremely pathetic attempt at comedy.💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩

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Okay... The story started well. The requests, although the last one is strange, are tolerable. The story was great until the last chapter of Captain Marvel, after that, it seems like the author got lazy. I didn't want to describe the costume, and although the costume was the cover of the story, it was a side image, which barely showed anything. After he became the "Black Spider" 🤮🤢🤢🤮... Horrible name. What's the deal with the name Spider-Man? Returning to the subject, after he fully became a hero, he started acting like Deadpool, and that little Batman joke almost made me burst a vein. I know it was supposed to be a joke, but it wasn't very funny. I think that putting too many funny things one after the other makes the story unnerving. He had a lot of ideas, but he didn't know what to do and ended up losing inspiration and wrote whatever came to mind. The idea was great. Really great. Making him fit into Marvel's history in Captain Marvel was surprising and very welcome. But, like I said, after that, the story fell apart. You couldn't read more than one chapter without wanting some villain to kill the MC. Sorry for the weird and long review, but that's it. In fact, I loved the mother’s character. She reminds me of mine.

Terrifying grammar, read only if you can bear it. Terrifying grammar, read only if you can bear it. Terrifying grammar, read only if you can bear it. Terrifying grammar, read only if you can bear it. Terrifying grammar, read only if you can bear it. Terrifying grammar, read only if you can bear it. Terrifying grammar, read only if you can bear it.

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the main character was so stupid I lost so many brain cells that I literally felt my iq drop multiple times

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Got 2 chapters in and had to stop, the writing quality is just janky and awkward. This needs a rewrite with an editor who can decipher and reword sentences to flow better and make more sense.

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The story really good and pretty easy to understand, love Eve btw. It really keeps u interested in the story and wonder what’s going to happen next and I like what he did with Eve. I can’t wait for more!!!!!

Imma w8 for you author but don't drop this book also this is a good book .........................................................................................

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