And the role of Ororo Munroe/Storm goes to... Kat Graham

For Jean Gray, I recommend... Katherine Mcnamara

Hah... I don't really like it when the story turns to the multiverse. They are separate universes, separate lives, different relationships and more lies. If it were for another reality of the world itself, just like Marvel and DC, I wouldn't say anything, but another universe from a completely different series is boring and ridiculous. I know it's only for a few chapters, but since this story is slow-paced, it will take at least 10 chapters, maybe twice as long. It would be much easier to do a new story about the other universe with another protagonist, once you finished this one. Many stories fail because they try to introduce multiverses into their writing, but end up running out of ideas, they simply give up or don't have the recoveries they expected. A useful thing to do with space and time magic is a DBZ time room. Just an idea. Regardless of what I do, I will read it. Just don't linger too long in another universe.

He forced himself not to use it.

I'm the only one rooting for the MC to actually die? I mean, that only happened because he stopped using force. If he had continued using it, his power would have been much greater. It's so frustrating that it makes you want to stop reading.

The story is very good. Really very good. The protagonist is well developed and his progress, although slow, is just right. He still has 4 years before the events of 'Avengers 1' and he won't even participate, since he kind of can't. The only thing I have to complain about, for lack of a better word, is that some chapters are very short and some events that could be summarized in 1 or two chapters last longer. The time jumps are short. From time to time, you can skip 3 months and then say what was done in that time. I won't complain. So, the story is perfect. Hope you don't mess up, huh? There is. One suggestion from me is that he starts going after HYDRA bases or after the worst human beings in the world. Drug dealers, murderers, dictators and others. And for the costume, although I love Akatsuki's outfit, I would like to see him dressed as Red Hood with the red cloud symbol on the back. That's my assessment. To be continued. Please.

The correct name is Niklaus. Klaus is the nickname, as is Nik.

Just? As if 'the Lykaon' wasn't ripped off enough.

Okay... The story started well. The requests, although the last one is strange, are tolerable. The story was great until the last chapter of Captain Marvel, after that, it seems like the author got lazy. I didn't want to describe the costume, and although the costume was the cover of the story, it was a side image, which barely showed anything. After he became the "Black Spider" 🤮🤢🤢🤮... Horrible name. What's the deal with the name Spider-Man? Returning to the subject, after he fully became a hero, he started acting like Deadpool, and that little Batman joke almost made me burst a vein. I know it was supposed to be a joke, but it wasn't very funny. I think that putting too many funny things one after the other makes the story unnerving. He had a lot of ideas, but he didn't know what to do and ended up losing inspiration and wrote whatever came to mind. The idea was great. Really great. Making him fit into Marvel's history in Captain Marvel was surprising and very welcome. But, like I said, after that, the story fell apart. You couldn't read more than one chapter without wanting some villain to kill the MC. Sorry for the weird and long review, but that's it. In fact, I loved the mother’s character. She reminds me of mine.

Okay. The scenes were awesome. But it seems like he's just showing off, not showing authority. Some might even say childish. I personally liked it, but I felt that little shiver of other people's shame. A good way to demonstrate his power, his authority, would be in a silent way. A master does not need to show himself for others to recognize him. But, he doesn't have that kind of power yet. Staying silent would make it seem like he's scared, so it was a good idea. Still, I thought the door scene was exaggerated. But great chapter.

It's starting to get exaggerated. Both in the number of chapters for a single inspection that has not passed 10 minutes and in the attack. In some later chapter he will complain that he let his emotions get the better of him and this had annoying consequences for him. The story is good, but it's starting to turn into Dragon ball. Remember? More than 50 episodes for 5 minutes countdown. Shorten the scenes. Or put it all in one or two chapters. Your creativity is great.

I think it's possible to summarize the spectators' reaction in two more chapters. Honestly, there were 10 chapters or more showing the behind-the-scenes of this film, so the reaction from viewers is enough. Just on top. Oh, and the story is great. I can't wait to see him win the Oscar.

Two days. Four cell phone recharges. This story is definitely one of the best stories I've ever read. Both in the theme of the story and in any other story. I'm looking forward to more chapters and getting to the Oscars soon.

This was one of the best chapters so far. The right amount of words and an ideal ending.

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If it were that easy to use legilimency on anyone and manipulate their choices, Voldemort would not have been created. Dumbledore would have used legilimency as soon as he met him or when he noticed the boy was turning dark. Okay, Dumbledore and Snape did some very questionable things, but there are many who hate them as if they were Voldemort himself. If so, we have to hate Ron, Harry and several other characters. One mistake was enough for people to create conspiracy theories about Dumbles.

Dr. Manhattan?

True. I just wanted to innovate.

MJ=Madelaine Petsch