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Marvel: The Alternate Spider (Dropped)

THIS IS DROPPED! I want to improve my writing/world building/character development skills so that I can move ahead with the story easily. Sorry for giving you this. But you may still read it point out mistakes and help me. Thank You for reading this story and helping me improve my skills. ---------- What if Peter Parker knew the future? What if he had the chance to save Uncle Ben and change everything about his life? Will he still become "the friendly neighborhood spider-man" or will he become something else entirely? Experience the growth of this alternate spider in an alternate universe. ---------- My first language is not English. This is my first work, although dropped but it still helps me a lot in identifying my failures and weaknesses. So feel free to comment anything and everything about the story. If you do not like the story please tell me why, so that I can improve those aspects in my next chapters.

Crooked_Pool · Anime & Comics
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24 Chs

Daredevil & Captain America

Although Peter lamented the fact that his master could still beat him, he knew it now required some effort. There were massive improvements in his body, mind and skills. His peak physical conditioning now included superhuman sensory control.

His sense of touch was so acute now that his finger could feel the faint impressions of ink on a printed page, allowing him to read by touch. The rest of his skin is equally sensitive, enabling him by concentration to feel minute temperature and pressure changes in the atmosphere around him. Even with his senses of vision, smell and hearing blocked, he could feel the presence of a person standing three feet away from him simply by his or her body heat and disturbance of air.

A side effect of his enhanced sense of touch was his ability to manipulate his muscles and internal organs. The sense of touch was not just external, but internal too (central nervous system), thereby giving him the ability to have total body control. This helped improve his peak human strength (could now lift 363 Kgs with some effort) and peak human speed ( could now move at speeds equal to that of the absolute finest human athlete, being capable of running at a sustained 30 mph). This also increased his agility and reflexes to superhuman levels i.e. Parker now had a reaction time that 15 times faster than a normal human.

Due having his body already evolved 10 years ago, and now with his extensive training he had superhuman stamina i.e. his body automatically eliminates the excessive build-up of fatigue-producing chemicals in his muscles, giving him exceptional endurance. His body had also reached peak human durability due to the torture training that his master Izo forced upon him (also giving him the ability to numb himself to pain).

Everything was thanks to his dedicated training; his slightly 'evolved' body which originally only had more energy than others; and the mystical chi. Due to chi, Peter already had peak human healing this meant that he healed faster than the average person. His body was efficient enough to fight off most microbe, foreign body, and other pathogens, giving him a high immunity to all infections and diseases.

His other senses were also enhanced to peak human levels. Peter's sense equilibrium and balance was perfect now. He could adjust his position by instinct, which enables him to balance himself on virtually any object, no matter how small or narrow

His combat proficiency has increased a lot from fighting in the underground rings where nothing was illegal. His combat style was a mixture of military advanced close combat arts, kali, krav-maga, karate, Savate, MMA, BJJ, and ninjutsu.

Fighting with his life on the line really helped him overcome his fears and also due to the influence of the memories he got, he was not a naive goodie two shoes anymore. Although he did not kill anyone in the underground fights, he still heavily injured those who wanted to kill him. Other were left with light injuries.

Due to his enhanced mind, photographic memory, perfect recall, and a good body; he quickly became proficient in cold weapons like sticks, rods, knives, blades, darts, shuriken, nunchakus, anything and everything that could be used as a weapon. What about guns? Peter dismissed the idea because his aunt and uncle would never allow him go to the shooting range to play with such dangerous weapons. And their written consent was very much required by the authorities.

His radar sense also developed quickly. He can now synthesize a very close analogue of three-dimensional three-hundred-and-sixty-degree human sight.

Young Peter was already a dangerous man. He knew himself that he was now almost on par with the Daredevil and Captain America from his memories, and was only limited by his combat experience. He had the skills and abilities of both and with combat experience he will surely surpass them.

Peter could already be considered a superhero if he dressed as one and went out. With his enhanced mind and senses, he could remember things without even seeing them. With his body, he could beat tens of people easily without breaking a sweat.

To solve the issue of combat experience, Izo, now wanted to take him to Hell's Kitchen at night to fight criminals. Izo knew about the "With great power, comes great responsibility" ideology, and he also knew Peter wanted to use his power to help the people.

Both the master and student had a discussion. Peter told him that he would fight crime as he had some power now. He would beat criminals and even kill those who could not be brought to justice. Yes, his sense of justice and his ideology had changed from what it would have been originally, but Peter believed that this was for the better.

"With great power comes great responsibility. My responsibility is to first protect those who I love and then protect those who I can. I won't lie to myself, I can't save everyone but I will try my best. And anyone who has the responsibility to protect, has the authority to kill in certain situations.

I will also not refrain from fighting with everything on line. Criminals do not have morals, they kill to survive. If I kill one day, I will kill to protect myself and the others. I am not a naive self righteous boy, or may be I am a self righteous boy with a distorted sense of justice but atleast I not naive anymore. Ofcourse I will not forget to enjoy life and when I grow old, I won't be like a certain drunkard who gambles away all his student's hard earned money." He told Izo.

*Bonk*

Although Izo was happy with this, he still smacked Peter for his innocent comments about a 'certain drunkard'.