Reviews of Marvel Savitar psycho
Marvel Savitar psycho
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Interesting story, but for the most sacred thing, it changes the way of doing the dialogues and paragraphs for God, I don't know when it's the thoughts, when it's speaking or when it's narrating an event, even the paragraphs are poorly designed... It improves on that and the reader's experience will be greatly increased. As simple as doing: "for when they speak". (for when it is a thought). And write the paragraphs well, that they are not so long... Another thing is to explain the skills of the MC well, which is quite a confusion, because I thought it was going to be Dr. Fate, but apparently it is not.
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