Marco phenix fire Sasuke amatarasu etc

I mean about the mc in ur story

what is the sure hit of open domain

the fic is great I finished it in a day it was that much interesting, the oc characters are involved and aren't over bearing but I would have like the mc name to be more cool like toji or satoru or shiki or sora and I would hope mc gets ability to learn jutsu faster as it would be more interesting and I would also love to see original jutsu rather than Rasengan to used as its often used in every Naruto fiction. love to see u finish the fic

it's basically boring without any plot it's wishfullment with arrogant MC with plot armor is everyone listen to him he doesn't even plan it he says it and everyone starts bowing to him basically the third hokage giving him flying thunder god just because he asks for it.

what a hypocrite the story getting boring and it has no future making a proper plot

yah seems unlikely that king of wakanda would ever allow or be nealing in front of someone else they throw logic out when it comes to pride, no matter how techno God he is if wakanda don't fear God's or Thanos then u got no chance but you have to make your power look dominant one what can I say it's just won't happen In marvel like advance version of ultron taking down wakanda ya u can massicare them but not make them go against What they are pridefull and belief in the God which is magical in nature magic trumps technology any day

lemon s are fine and u do a good job of it writing but may it gets boring but u do u

bullying only works when u let it or u don't have friends but beating up a guy when you're super powered doesn't that is worse than that it's called assault and miss use of power, the writer try to justify it but he just wants to f**k his girlfriend and sister so no point giving justification. actually Flash is well written character in ultimate spiderman fanfic writers just go over the top

I don't think hakari would lose to current mc let's be honest , but it's your story I can't say anything about the fight

for ashura path instead of random weapons make it so he can use 6 paths weapons that Buddha uses from records of ragnarok 2 it would be more convenient

one of the best. it has potential. and chapters could be longer3

they can also fuse together and make a new type of shikigami like agito fusion of nue and divine dogs it's from recent chapter so and explain rest like rabbit, modoka deer, max elephant, toads, ox, don't know the rest

author is really funny with his words like limitless, eternal, unlimited or ultimate. cute 😅🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣, how can someone measure unlimited speed like tell me how fast he is not how long he can run etc, but really cute writing can't wait to read first chapter

Sasuke would be way stronger than cannon if itachi trained him

but there are many things about sukuna would make story go wrong

I don't get it what's it about raising children it's less about adventures and more about slice of life it gets boring very Fast

Great work really great but it can be awesome if he wrote clearly. But hey awesome storyline and not some smut feast

Just use coconuts for rubber ball and for balloon use the soft stuff inside the coconut it is round and isn't durable like outer shell.

I love the fic, can you complete it or atleast give us the link