darklord23a
Wow the stability is 1 chapter per day!! That’s awesome, 5 ⭐️ for update stability! Too bad I can’t read it.... Can’t really give a good review because the grammar is honestly awful. The writing quality brought down the whole thing. I read the whole first chapter and I lost all motivation in reading. Well, It’s written in English but it felt like Math. You have to add 1 and 1 together but instead of getting the obvious answer of 2, your answer would be undefined. No use trying if in the end, you still won’t understand anything.
Make the MC Master of All Things- Magic(Rune, Wizardry, Cosmic energy or other energy and Sorcerer)-Already a sorcerer though, Martial Artist(Chi and Many more arts), Science(Scientist, Engineer or many more)- By making him every mastery beyond the level we can imagine step by step. Also make the appereance of Comic charaters more like Shang Chi and many more Asian Characters, Make mutants into meta-humans with story. Hope to see those soon.