Reviews of Married to the Queen of Darkness
Married to the Queen of Darkness
WolfsBane
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Amazing characters and interesting story. No overbearing CEO, no debt ridden so called female lead full of revenge , no step sister or best friend who are cheaters. this novel has fresh plot and the comedic undertone is great. I like the way male lead is more like female lead๐๐๐๐ and vise versa. I would like to read other novels like his.....
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Love and comedy seems to be the direction this novel will be taking but I like how the twist is it's the male lead who is usually in the position of a female lead hahaha. It's pure gold. Good job author, please continue to work hard and give me more chaps. <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 If I could, I'd give it 9/5 stars (less one for punctuation and typos) hahaha
I was intrigued by the premise, but, eh, delivery was kinda weak. It's clear that the author isn't too well versed in English at least in the early chapters. Hopefully writing this helped them get better. The flow is actually pretty good, but the 'conversational' tone the... narrator? takes is mildly annoying. It feels like it's trying to be funny/clever too hard, but ends up awkward. The characters feel a bit artificial, as if they are defined by a trope or cliche that is stuck to their forehead. I'm not saying that you won't find people like them in reality, but they feel like those homeschooled kids that can't read the mood. All in all, it's obvious that it's a beginner work and if you're fine with that then the premise shows a lot of promise. If there's ever a rewritten version of this that cleans things up, I'll give it another shot.
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Mmm. Personally, I don't think this is a great novel. I don't like the personality of the protagonist, he's a liiiittle bit... how do I say this. He sounds like he's written by an author who isn't really socially adjusted. Reading the first few chapters, it definitely seems like the case. A cashier won't ignore you just because you're a country bumpkin or a nerd, they may just be having a bad day, or they aren't big on customer service. And I don't know a single person who thinks it's loser-ish to spend a day watching movies, as not everyone is a party-holic. What I'm trying to say is, the protagonist is way too thin-skinned, and has too much of an inferior complex. The characters thus don't feel too realistic. It tries to insert a comedic undertone, but the humor's just kind of flat. I just really don't know anyone who finds quirky comebacks that are inserted everywhere, funny. Also, the writing style is very *******. Too much "!!!" and ALL CAPS, among other things. Emphasis is done in all the wrong ways. If you want to emphasize a character's emotions, pour everything into descriptive adjectives. It's not completely bad, compared to some of the fanfictions on this site, along with some of the female protagonist romance novels, but you can't say it's good either, especially since there are actually some really good works on this site. Overall: 3.4 stars Writing Quality: 3 stars Stability of Updates: 5 stars Story Development: 3 stars Character Design: 2 stars World Background: 4 stars
