Franxiscus_Siregar
Dont Know why everyone is praising this story so much i am 4 chapters in and already confused. he can just Take out sea kings and pirates with devil fruits with no explanation and why is there system tagged if there isnt one and the grammer is awful, different things just end up happening and you just have to read on with no answers
One of the best fanfic i've ever read, even though it's translated the author did a great job editing it, there is some mistakes but still good job. Story development is fantasic, i'm at chapter 500 and the story have a lot of twists and interesting parts which i wouldn't say since it's a spoiler. Character design is marvelous, the characters stay true to the anime/manga and there is some dialogues that is really funny. I don't know about update stability but I'm gonna take the other's words and say it's good. The World background is the best one on a fanfic that i've ever seen. The World in this fanfic is really precise to the anime and the original author makes auxiliary and author's note in the novel to explain the misundet standings (bonus points for funny author's notes). Anyways all and all an amazing fanfic and great translator. 10/10 would recommend
(Not good at reviews so yeah... read at your caution) Hmm the novel was good but it had its problems Writing quality 3 This Book had some writing problems like Putting he Instead of she and Vice versa also some sentences could have been phrased better aside from that it's good. Updating stability 5 Being a translation The updating quality is surprisingly good Posting 4 or more chaps every day. Story development 3.5 Well the story Hasnt developed a lot it being only 125 chaps a lot of it for me was just him killing, then training, Getting rep from the marines, *sigh* i Give up as I don't know for this one. Character design 4 Tbh Idk what the **** character Design is So ima go say based on logic or what I believe character design is which is him Describing characters appearances which if that's what it is then he did a fairly good job World background 4 One-piece being an already well-written world their isn't much problem here just that this being a fic needs more world-building as The one-piece world is large
The best one-piece fanfic I've read by far, the amount of world-building and creativity was incredible, even if I wasn't in it at first after 20-30 chapters, I was completely hooked. The translation is not the best, but it is decent. Rarely have I seen an author who can take an established world and make it his own. Thanks for the good time.