Review Detail of OtakuReverence in Marine’s Dark Admiral (by High Fever 36 Degrees)(complete)

(Not good at reviews so yeah... read at your caution) Hmm the novel was good but it had its problems Writing quality 3 This Book had some writing problems like Putting he Instead of she and Vice versa also some sentences could have been phrased better aside from that it's good. Updating stability 5 Being a translation The updating quality is surprisingly good Posting 4 or more chaps every day. Story development 3.5 Well the story Hasnt developed a lot it being only 125 chaps a lot of it for me was just him killing, then training, Getting rep from the marines, *sigh* i Give up as I don't know for this one. Character design 4 Tbh Idk what the **** character Design is So ima go say based on logic or what I believe character design is which is him Describing characters appearances which if that's what it is then he did a fairly good job World background 4 One-piece being an already well-written world their isn't much problem here just that this being a fic needs more world-building as The one-piece world is large