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Reviews of Live, Love and be Happy

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Live, Love and be Happy

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The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv4The_Procrastinator

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3yr
21

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yaejin
yaejinLv3yaejin

The writing style is really different and the plot line is good. The ellaborate description of the rich world was spot on and the mc being a spoiled girl had her faults. Just keep note on the grammar. I would love to know how the fl would take revenge against her best friend and hubby.

3yr
11
Gourmet_DAO
Gourmet_DAOLv7Gourmet_DAO

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3yr
1
zetsubouaichan
zetsubouaichanLv14zetsubouaichan

I guess reading this book would be a much enjoyable experience if the author did a bit clean up on the writing... Although I can see a lot of improvement as the story goes on, I hope that the author will take time to edit the chapters at the beginning. I mean, the plot is pretty good and it would be a shame if potential readers chose to leave after reading the first few chapters. I think the author did a good job of creating a hateful MC, but... after everything that the MC faced, I'm looking forward to seeing how her character's development most. Good luck, author.

3yr
11
Tangent34
Tangent34Lv4Tangent34

Dear Author, The storyline of your novel is very good. Also the story development is in pace. The only thing I would suggest you is to write in quotation. There are a few grammatical errors but can be corrected once you read thoroughly. Keep the hard work going on! Good Luck!

3yr
1
lucabear
lucabearLv2lucabear

It wasn't my typical read, but it was quite interesting nonetheless. I liked the initial characters, and the allocation of assets was quite fascinating. Keep it up

3yr
11
Bird_0f_Hermes
Bird_0f_HermesLv4Bird_0f_Hermes

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3yr
11
Black_Rabbit_Oz
Black_Rabbit_OzLv11Black_Rabbit_Oz

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3yr
11
minho_Shiny
minho_ShinyLv3minho_Shiny

The story was good and author gave a detailed description making it easy to imagine things. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style.The only thing I would like to advice was the author should use " " Quotation marks during dialogue exchange. All in all author did a great job and looking forward to read more. Keep up the good work author πŸ‘

3yr
11
Lazy_leon
Lazy_leonLv13Lazy_leon

The story is good and all! A billionaire father dies and his asshole children get all the money but you need to add "......" When someone talking and there are some miscellaneous grammar mistake. Use! ~*""'β€™β€˜ and it will make your novel better! Good luck!

3yr
11
lazylyn
lazylynLv10lazylyn

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3yr
ruffatorres
ruffatorresLv13ruffatorres

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3yr
EldritchTheDead
EldritchTheDeadLv2EldritchTheDead

From the first chapter the story is definitely interesting. Based on how the story goes (which I'm guessing but would read further), it explores the daily life of a grieving lavish family. But like an ******* like you, I make mistakes too and it's hard to set in ideal situations we want. I will keep reading, so let's support each other!

3yr
1
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