LordFinn
This must be the most shameless review. Writing Quality- Ofc 5 stars. Because you guys can tell me to fix wrong parts. So this can be perfect in time. Stability of Updates- Ofc 5 stars. Because if I promise a chapter in a year. And publish ten chapters. That's mean, stable updates for the next ten years. Story Development- Ofc 5 stars. Even 6. Every chapter developing like crazy... Character Design- Ofc 5 stars. Tho I'm not good at describing what they wear but, they have different and interesting personalities. World Background- Ofc 5 stars. You must feel while reading. Yup yup 5. No harem? A harem of trees? My imagination is not that much. How many chapters do you think will be? I planned ten chapters. But can be more with dividing parts. And this is a side story of another one. Do you think your story is good? Must be better than some translated cultivation novels.
Interesting premise with a unique setting. Here we have a shaman. Oh no, he died. Now, we have an apple tree. Hm? Was that too much of a jump? Nah, LordFinn knows what to do with this beginning. He will continue with a good story. So, hop on in and eat some apples while reading this book. Some grammar errors here and there, but the story overall flows well. Keep it up, LordFinn! >3</
My bad for not giving my review earlier. I thought I have done it! But anyway, as a romance reader and author, this is not my cup of tea. However, your book changed my view of it. I find your book really interesting. You indeed have a good imagination and the way you portrayed your characters... Well... Terrific!!!! I'm totally hooked and in love with the first chapter. I really felt what you were trying to express. The following chapters are also awesome. All the details of the characters are impressive. Keep updating! Coz all I do is keep rereading the chapters, I'm beginning to memorise it πππ Good job LordFinn
Great job for your first chapter, FinnniE! I don't really read a lot of fantasy novels but this was easier to read so I was able to finish the long chapter π. I would suggest for you to improve on the dialogues by associating the lines to the character who's speaking for better reading experience. Good luck for the contest! ππ
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