Great job for your first chapter, FinnniE! I don't really read a lot of fantasy novels but this was easier to read so I was able to finish the long chapter 😂. I would suggest for you to improve on the dialogues by associating the lines to the character who's speaking for better reading experience. Good luck for the contest! 💕😍
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