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But who would have thought that Yang Caidie still held a grudge? In her teenage years, she found a chance when the Black-haired Wolf was unguarded and killed it with several swift motions. She even wrote a note on the corpse of the wolf: "Those who bully my brother will die – Culprit Yang Caidie."- W_A_Azan3yrCommented
I know. I used too much description here. Am trying to change but it's rooted inside me. Even I feel that it's not good to do it like this. I'll try to change soon.
eyes, then covered them with his hands as the radiance intensified. A roaring sound, clamored in his ears, sending waves of pain to his skull. He could feel a fiery heat washing over him as if he was drowning in molten lava. Then with suddenness, Soren's world turned to black. - W_A_Azan3yrCommented
I can't let a girl starve.
"Risha must be starving." he whispered. "I have to move quickly" - W_A_Azan3yrPosted
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- W_A_Azan3yrReplied to CaptainChaos0301
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"One day Risha, am going to become the greatest mage ever and have lots of riches. Then I'll bring the greatest healers to heal your eyes and ask you to marry me. We will escape to the mountains, buy a big farm and have lots of children, like twenty of them who look like you and me." - W_A_Azan3yrCommented
Okay
"Are yo sure you are not just trying to ditch my lessons?" Risha pouted as she put her hands on her hips trying to look menacing. She failed miserably. - W_A_Azan3yrReplied to CaptainChaos0301
I didn't see that
She smiled when she heard his voice. She was not more than fifteen years old, about a year younger than Soren. She sat on the bed, her long black hair falling around a thin sharp-featured face. Her remarkably wide green, were sightless but active, sending their blind gaze wavering across the shed to the sound of his voice. - W_A_Azan3yrReplied to CaptainChaos0301
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"Am here Risha." - W_A_Azan3yrReplied to CaptainChaos0301
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Dull golden eyes stared back at him from his reflection on the mirror. he had a pale complexion and his cheeks were slightly sunken from years of malnutrition. Scars ran from his neck to the rest of his body. Some he could remember from the early days in the slums when he used to fight for whatever garbage food that had been removed from the city, but many of them had remained a mystery from the moment he had opened his eyes. He could only guess that something bad had happened to him and he was a bit glad that he couldn't remember it. The fact that they made him look hideous also helped make most of the slum people keep their distance from him. - W_A_Azan3yrReplied to CaptainChaos0301
I just wanted to add a dialogue
"Brrrrrrr!" he trembled from the cold water as he combed his finger through his thick wet hair dangling from his face to stop them from covering his eyes. he then moved inside to stand in front of the broken piece of mirror, rubbing his slightly bloodshot eyes as he examined his features. - W_A_Azan3yrReplied to CaptainChaos0301
Okay genius.
He slowly rolled over, a feeble attempt to reach the water skin bottle on the dead beast, but it only made the wounds on his back to scream in protest. - W_A_Azan3yrPosted
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- W_A_Azan3yrCommentedCh 8 Another Monkeyyy!!
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- W_A_Azan3yrReplied to isharislynkia
It's called a cliffhanger[img=recommend]
"What is wrong with me?" he whimpered. - W_A_Azan3yrReplied to yack611
thx. I'll change it now
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