Killer_Slut
Chap 9. Story set in Arcane, obviously, with, again, obviously stuff from league of legends, the small indie game. No apparent grammar errors. From the little we've seen Arcane cast feels in character, which is very good in any fanfic, and oc feels like human being so far, and has some normal interaction with parents (0.0). World building feels good, not too much, but enough to feel like reading about piltover. Too little chapters to talk about update stability so i slap a 4(but hoping to at least 1 per week).
This is a re-write of a previous story that was roughly the same length. I can’t remember exactly how long it was because it was a long time ago and the chapters were reposted. Check old reviews. The original was awesome and had great writing. I got interested in LoL lore because of the original. That being said, I will wait to get re-invested in it until more than the currently released 28 chapters. It nothing against the story or author, they are both great. I just can’t get into it again if updates don’t come somewhat regularly. Author is too good at creating a great story…I don’t want to wait months for an update…I know it can be hard and life happens, but I’m just warning other readers. Who am I kidding, I’ll reread the story. Just warning newcomers…
Probably the best work on this app. You don't pander to people who want to self insert as the main character that much. Writing style, syntax, grammar, basically perfect. I love how you're playing with the world and it's characters. You keep things consistent (personality, characters, butterfly effects, etc). Just everything seems very new and refreshing. Only wish you could update more, but I don't even mind that much since your work is such high quality.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say
Best fanfic of Arcane I've read, you author-san are a blessing! Best fanfic of Arcane I've read, you author-san are a blessing! Best fanfic of Arcane I've read, you author-san are a blessing! Best fanfic of Arcane I've read, you author-san are a blessing! Best fanfic of Arcane I've read, you author-san are a blessing!