simply garbage...now before u come for my ass let me tell u why I feel like it. 1. The world background screams ATG but the author tries to make it original by giving new names to places. It simply feels like a cheap copy version of ATG. 2. The mentality of the MC is ****ed up. He kills a woman who offers him a job and robs her clean and his reason to do that is because he is poor, he wants to stay low-key , he found lust on her eyes. idiot wants to stay low-key but kills without batting an eye without thinking of possible consequences. 3. He is a hypocrite. He killed a woman because he felt lust on her eyes and just after that he acts like a horny dog when he meets a beautiful girl. 4. He is mad and curse the god for being stingy with kp but has no problem spending almost all of his kp to buy a medicine for a girl in exchange with her virginity and when the girl offers her body he acts like a sage and refuses it. I call this bullshit. 5. just when he acts like a sage and refuse a girl giving her body to him, he finds himself in a bar and spits some cringy ass lines to random woman and boom he is ready to get laid. hypocrite at it's finest. killed a woman because he found lust in her eyes and now he is here like a horny dog who will sleep with any woman he finds. garbage. 7. the most disappointing thing is his character. he has not a single quality that would describe him as a Spartan much less the god kratos himself! I know he is not kratos but still it's so off-putting to read this shit and imagine him being kratos.
Had potential but with such a dumb mc i dont think it does anymore. The mc screams and then the “king” of the jungle screams and makes the mc quiet and afraid.... so what does the mc do? He screams multiple times because he is an idiot. Now he is out of the jungle and a carriage of someone who is most likely important stops him and offers him a job. His first thought? Kill them both and take their stuff since he is poor. What do we find out? That she is the heir of an entore sect. Just awful. Dumb mc. Waste of time
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