Reviews of Kiara Fried Phoenix: A Hololive Story
Kiara Fried Phoenix: A Hololive Story
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Haven't read much but it looks interesting...as for why I am writing this review before reading much. the reason is simple–so damn less views! Now, I don't wanna sound like a smartarse but I think its just common sense. I don't know whether the author deliberately didn't do it or just didn't know. Would suggest a few things: 1. The Name—Change the name of book from "KFP" to "Hololive: Kiara Fried Phoenix" or at least something along those lines. the KFP just isn't helping in any case. 2. The Cover—using a picture of a bunch of holo-idols together or just using a fanart of Kiara would be much better than just having no cover pic. It adds more appeal and people(i) usually don't click on books without a cover. All that out of the way, I love the concept and looking forward to your work.
Matsuri was this such a good fanfic, i wish i could forget about it and re-read endlessly. My favorite character ofc was (excluding rushia) Ryan, alot because of his personality and his lifestyle before KFP started making it easier to be relatable to. Though I'm sad that's the main series is done I'm looking foward to the side stories. and who mnows maybe if i had enough inspiration i might make a side story in a parallel universe with my own character. but i don't think i will be able to and also because i don't wanna indirectly ruin the story for myself. Thank you for making this story author from the deepest part of my heart.
KFP is an awesome story. Not only does it retain the personalities of the members of Hololive, it brings life to them that I don't think has ever been done before. Also, the different original characters are either quite good to fantastic (Edhas is one of my favorite characters in all of fanfiction, if I'm being honest, he reminds me of Greed from Fullmetal Alchemist a lot). If you like Hololive, Holostars, or just Vtubers in general, there's something for you in here.
Finally a hololive fanfic. This is just full of cringe literally im just at chapter 2 and im already dying from the cringe specially the references like Ame beings a pro gamer and Pekora being a CEO of a construction company most really gave me the cringe, Its wholesome and all with a high dose of cringe recommend to all HoloLive fans its great will definitely give you a smile from the wholesome and a big grin from the cringe.
